Castle Paradox

omerta · Joined: 22 Oct 2003 Posts: 25

This image has been indefinitely postponed, or simply cancelled. Move along.

Gizmog1 · Posted: Mon Mar 01, 2004 12:54 am Post subject:

Well, I'm no expert, but, I'd say you need to change the pose of his arms and head a little. He looks too much like he's kind of going "Yo, check me out.". No, I can't explain quite what I mean, but that's the impression I get.

Asides from that, I love the doll heads on the belt, and the smiley face on his shoulder is a nice touch. Looks pretty good so far, omerta. You're quite talented.

Jazz_Man · Joined: 02 Sep 2003 Posts: 248 Location: My basement.

Looks good. I particularly dig the detail in the face. The eyes are cool.

With the body position, I got the impression when first looking at it that it was an action shot, where he'd just jumped and landed... but then I read Giz's thing. Whereas, I can see Giz's point, I still kind of agree with the mid action pose.

But either way, it's confusing. Maybe find a way to clarify, or just move the arms altogether... perhaps in a sort of crouched-gargoyle-ish pose, for an idea.

Setu_Firestorm · Posted: Mon Mar 01, 2004 2:34 pm Post subject:

Dude. That thing scares me.
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halogrunt001 · Joined: 24 Aug 2003 Posts: 17

There's a lot of detail in the face but the other parts are to blurry.

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Sephyroth · Posted: Tue Mar 02, 2004 2:58 pm Post subject:

Poor dolls... They must all have been deceived by that smiley face...
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omerta · Joined: 22 Oct 2003 Posts: 25

Thanks for the responses so far.

halo - WIP means "Work in Progress", and this is the first step, so it's bound to be rough.