Castle Paradox

Sephyroth · Posted: Thu Mar 03, 2005 2:59 pm Post subject:

Meade, the airship engineer of the game.

Arlia. Her costume had been altered a bit, so I'll have to fix that in the game. Also, I just realized how long her sword arm was. OH SNAP. Also also, I just realized how long she was. Period.

The Dark Prophet.[/img]
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Moogle1 · Posted: Thu Mar 03, 2005 5:20 pm Post subject:

Your guy heads are way small and her arm is in a weird pose. Other than that, good.
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LeRoy_Leo · Posted: Sat Mar 26, 2005 10:31 pm Post subject:

BUMP!

Your recent characters intrigue me. Here is what I think about the art, though:

I'd simply say that they are really sketchy, but that doesn't bother me anymore. And I know you aren't going to sell these, but let me be critical for a minute.

The airship engineer, Meade has a good sort of menacing look about him. He's a tough guy from what I can tell. That's all "jolly-fine", but what bothers me are his pants. The general pose there lols me. He's been out drinking?
The concept came through at least.

Pssst... Arlia... Is a man. I think it's her masculine chin and thick, thick eyebrows. Good show, man. We needed more ugly heroines.

Other than that, the pose works. It's also like one of her legs is a different length than the other. Keep it up.

The "Dark prophet" looks awesome design-wise (reminds me of the state alchemists on "full metal alchemist"). Right now, it's hard to tell where one part of his outfit begins and where that part ends. I suggest that you darken the borders better next time. I have to touch my eyeballs to the screen to tell that he is wearing a cape and a trench coat (right?). You do want your audience to see all of your design, donâ€™t you? Besides that, darkening the borders also shows shadows under the clothing, which is essentially what shows the audience where the clothing is divided. Anyway, good job.
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