Castle Paradox

Heat · Posted: Thu Nov 20, 2003 9:07 pm Post subject: I Wac off.

http://www.uweb.ucsb.edu/~skam/colourmebadd.jpg

No Sew, I am not making her eyes any bigger...
The colouring is horrible, I know...it's my first time using a tablet. Remember, my rule :-D

Thanks to Steve for introducing me to OpenCanvas.
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Me · Posted: Thu Nov 20, 2003 9:14 pm Post subject:

Hmmm . . . nice, but the boobs seem a bit . . . flat? The left arm (her right) is positioned under the left reast, and makes it look like it lacks any thickness. Add some shading, maybe, and they should look better.
Also, the eyes need to be changed somehow. Not necessarily bigger, but there's something off about them. I can't put my finger on it right now . . . I'll post it later.
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Iblis · Posted: Thu Nov 20, 2003 9:15 pm Post subject:

Pretty good picture. And yeah, OpenCanvas is awesome.

Her shoulders look a little broad. Might just be a quirk of the perspective though.
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Heat · Posted: Thu Nov 20, 2003 9:15 pm Post subject:

Bah!!! No more shading. I don't have enough of a formal teaching to do that. The eye is just a copy of the right eye :-P
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Flamer · Posted: Thu Nov 20, 2003 10:13 pm Post subject:

bwahahah, if ever i've seen a funny hentai picture, this sure takes the cake...
obviously the clevage shows lack of experience and lack of detail on the legs shows how much you've seen...

anyway good pic... too many hair fringes on her forehead though. lessen the number and shrink the face...

in general, the picture is more scary than seductive... if that's what you're aiming for.
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Minnek · Posted: Thu Nov 20, 2003 10:17 pm Post subject:

W00t, new desktop wallpaper! Raspberry!

I've already made my comments to Heat, but... eh, I'll stick one of 'em here. I think the chin's too...eh, round? big? not sure. seems like a little more pointed would suit my tastes better, but that's just me. I'm not here to push my wants and needs and whatever on people Oookay...

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Heat · Posted: Thu Nov 20, 2003 10:22 pm Post subject:

Bahhh, screw it, am done. It took me forever and a day to draw it so am quite happy.

It's not hentai, I don't quite understand where you got that from. She's on the grass, with a flower in her cleavage leaning forward to unzip...I mean...leaning forward to give some head.

But in all seriousness I wasn't going for hentai...for if I had!!! ...I would've drawn Sew nakkid.
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RedMaverickZero · Posted: Fri Nov 21, 2003 7:13 am Post subject:

You should like, practice more of your drawing. Because no offense, but your drawing needs work. A LOT. There was a lot of stuff that looked sketchy. Just practice, becase I can guarantee that's the only way to get any better.
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Heat · Posted: Fri Nov 21, 2003 11:03 am Post subject:

Sketchy? Which part? I didn't care to redo the outlining using the tablet since I liked that look. It was done in pencil then inputted via a digital camera, erased the background noise via photoshop and while doing that it left the rough edges.
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Heat · Posted: Fri Nov 21, 2003 11:07 am Post subject:

Iblis · Posted: Fri Nov 21, 2003 1:38 pm Post subject:

I believe I mentioned this with your last picture, but the light glare should be on the same side of each eye. Generally the light is all coming from the same direction.

Also, if you look at the left (her left) shoulder its position in relation to the head it doesn't seem to give much room for a neck.
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Heat · Posted: Fri Nov 21, 2003 1:59 pm Post subject:

I know, the original drawing had it like that...so I copied and paste the right eye and forgot to change it :-P
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Uncommon · Posted: Fri Nov 21, 2003 2:12 pm Post subject:

You changed it quite a bit since last time I saw it. Truthfully, I prefered the hair before, but this looks decent, still. Never really aroused me, though.

Sew · Posted: Fri Nov 21, 2003 3:33 pm Post subject:

Sew nakkid eh?

Maybe you should get boobs down before you try the complexe lines that are "The One True Sew".

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