Castle Paradox

[Quinn]

I am willing to review some peoples games but only ones who havn't got any yet so if you want me to then tell me ok.
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Game Progress:
Emoticons-25% graphics(75%), story(50%)

[Chaos Nyte]

Quinn, after rejecting your last two painfully bad reviews, I suggest you retract this offer and get to some serious studying of how to write reviews. Maybe this article will help-
http://www.castleparadox.com/review-guidelines.php

[Quinn]

Sorry im just trying to help out, because i've seen people posting about there not being enough reviews and the ones that are done are all by the same people. So is there anywhere where I could learn to write better reveiws?
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Game Progress:
Emoticons-25% graphics(75%), story(50%)

[Quinn]

(This may be reviving a dead thread but I see this as the best place to post this.)

I hereby re-open this thread to anyone who would like there games reviewed (only if it isn't yet) as I have got the hang of it now.
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Im on 99% game making and 1% schoolwork so that kleaves no time to post.

Game Progress:
Emoticons-25% graphics(75%), story(50%)

[RedMaverickZero]

It would be nice to see a review of my very first game. AXLE RPG. So if you want a game that would appreciate a review, go for that one. It's about 5-6 hours long and err... interesting none the less. And if you get stuck in the game either open it up in custom.exe or ask me. There are multiple ways to contact me.
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Mr.Triangle's Maze: 70%
Takoyaki Surprise: 70%

[Fenrir-Lunaris]

Legend of Cale 2. If you mistake that as TSSE, about 50 people will jump on you for being an absolute idiot (since it says not to review it yet).

Anyway, I'd read some other LENGTHY reviews around here, notably any of Rinku's or Pepsi Ranger's since they're sort of the standard we're looking to set as far as our reviews go. Try to write a paragraph per section, if not more, and be sure your reviews have screenshots so they're more than likely to be accepted. Good luck, by the way.

[Quinn]

Ive played through about an hour of it and it seems good so far.
Axle I mean
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Im on 99% game making and 1% schoolwork so that kleaves no time to post.

Game Progress:
Emoticons-25% graphics(75%), story(50%)

[Quinn]

Okay I finished Axle (it was great) so im starting the review today and after that I will play Legend of Cale 2.
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Im on 99% game making and 1% schoolwork so that kleaves no time to post.

Game Progress:
Emoticons-25% graphics(75%), story(50%)

[Quinn]

I can't beleive it, I just spent like two hours on the Axle review and when I submited it it said Unable to display web page and I lost all my work. Is there any way to recover this, I don't think there is.
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Im on 99% game making and 1% schoolwork so that kleaves no time to post.

Game Progress:
Emoticons-25% graphics(75%), story(50%)

[Iblis]

I think the only thing you can do is to remember to copy the review into notepad/word/whatever next time you review it, before you hit submit.
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OHR Piano

[Quinn]

Yay, I finally finished the review (again) and got it submitted, lucky I remembered most of it. I will take your advice next time Iblis thanks.
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Im on 99% game making and 1% schoolwork so that kleaves no time to post.

Game Progress:
Emoticons-25% graphics(75%), story(50%)

[Quinn]

I can't download LOC2 for some reason (probably the file is to large for my internet) so I can't review it sorry.
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Im on 99% game making and 1% schoolwork so that kleaves no time to post.

Game Progress:
Emoticons-25% graphics(75%), story(50%)

[Fenrir-Lunaris]

I just noticed this as well. The file size is also apparently incorrect, though I don't understand why (likely a server issue). I'll see if I can upload a fixed version IF I can get my hands on an actual copy of the game. And the old download on OP:OHR doesn't work either.

[RedMaverickZero]

Thanks for the review man. Although as you know and I said. It was my first game. And I didn't learn plotscripting a little bit until I made Mr.Triangle's Shitty Adventure 5. I am glad you enjoyed Axle though. Took me like 5 months to make it. And yes it's sad, but before I knew about the OHR Community, I didn't know there was a copy and paste function. And me doing EVERY GRAPHIC in the OHR, I had to do it all one pixel at a time! Took me forever. I feel stupid about it now though. I think someday I may fix the ending of the game though. Because, everything just kinda happens if you've noticed. And I've been told the last bosses in the final world are VERY VERY hard to beat. So maybe someday, when I get off my lazy ass, I will work on those. I know for a fact I am adding more pix for the ending though. I planned it in the beginning but was too lazy. So I may spend a day doing it. Thanks for inspiration and I hope you saved your save data. Expect it out by end of Febuary.
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---------------Projects----
Mr.Triangle's Maze: 70%
Takoyaki Surprise: 70%

[Quinn]

No problem, I enjoy doing reveiws.
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Im on 99% game making and 1% schoolwork so that kleaves no time to post.

Game Progress:
Emoticons-25% graphics(75%), story(50%)