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Sorcer
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 Posted: Thu Nov 27, 2003 11:12 am Post subject: New picture, finally guys... New picture... Applause please. |
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Finnally a new picture...
Applause, you guys...
As always... C&C wanted.[/img]
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Roach Lir
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| Posted: Thu Nov 27, 2003 11:23 am Post subject: |
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I'm trying to find something wrong with it!
I can't!
It's very good!
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Hyperdrmr
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the neck could be a little longer, like a smidge, it looks like its crowded up there
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Uncommon
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| Posted: Thu Nov 27, 2003 4:40 pm Post subject: |
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| His shoulders have different widths, and his shirt is...weird. Interesting picture, nontheless. |
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Flamer
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| Posted: Thu Nov 27, 2003 8:50 pm Post subject: |
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great improvement, but... (dammit!) (sue me, i critisize in my sleep)
neck is tilted to the left (his right) a bit, while his shoulder is the reverse where the left shoulder (his right) is tilted upwards a tad making him look like his not interested in a fight.
yet, his face suggests otherwise, where it looks like he is keen in a fight or three.
his stomach is wierd... (looks like a girl's for some reason)
the fingers are good, but a few of them are bent the wrong way (who am i to speak, i can't even draw fingers... or can i??)
his "E" of the belt looks like it was just slapped there and doesn't fit with the belt itself.
everything else is great and should be practiced, so you do not forget the skill you have just displayed today (or whatever day it is/was)
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GMan1988
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| Posted: Fri Nov 28, 2003 6:29 am Post subject: |
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Flamer's right about the stomach. I saw that and so I thought it was a girl...
Maybe if you don't have as much a waist (make it a bit fatter), it won't look that way.
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Sew
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| Posted: Fri Nov 28, 2003 8:13 am Post subject: |
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Hey now. He never said it was a male! You are all just asuming. I mean, guess heats gender. You would be surprised.
Anyway, just remember what I told you in IRC. Fix those 9 things, and the picture will be perfect. ;-P
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Roach Lir
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| Posted: Fri Nov 28, 2003 9:18 am Post subject: |
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Now you mention it, the shoulders could use some work, and the stomach is a bit thin.
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Minnek
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| Posted: Fri Nov 28, 2003 11:47 am Post subject: |
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Bleh, what's so wrong with the stomach? I don't see anything bad about it, myself, and he still looks like a guy. Heh. I've already made all my comments to Sorcer, so...yeah.
I'm spamming again aren't I... 
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LeRoy_Leo
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| Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2003 1:29 am Post subject: |
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Funny how I work my way down to this so laaate. Nice work Sorcer, except what the others are saying about the stomach is true. Assuming it is a male we are looking at, the stomach should be broader, and if hes fit, it would have the abdominal muscles there, the little six pack, or if you want to be more creative; a 12 pack! (The posture is fine, as it sugests that he/she is thinking that the opponent he/she is about to face or is facing is no problem at all. He/she is just Gloteing...)
However, if it is a female, then tighten that belt before you go in battle! Yer pants are gunna fall down, and you'll get raped! (ummm... I had something that would have helped, but I lost it, so this turned into more of a joke post past the male part. I'm stickin' to the male advise. I will get back to you later, but it will probobly be on the IRC chat... Sorry.)
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Setu_Firestorm
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Flamer
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hahah  leroy's post about rape, reminds me of hentai monsters.
(if you thnk it's gonna fall off, look at the "X-men" uniform, worn by rogue and jean.)
but seriously... i thought it was a man, with his broad shoulders and prominant chin with scars, anyone would think it.
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GMan1988
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| Quote: | | i thought it was a man, with his broad shoulders and prominent chin with scars |
Girls can have scars too, you know  .
Plus, some people don't always get the anatomical details correct. And I am not pointing this towards Sorcer, it's general (which really pertains to me, because I'm the worst artist EVER ). I like the drawing, really, I'm just very critical.
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LeRoy_Leo
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| Flamer wrote: | | hahah leroy's post about rape, reminds me of hentai monsters. |
Funny... I was thinking something along those lines... But honestly, I was only supporting those who said that there were some problems. I really dont see any at all. The posture seems natural enough. I owe some of the critics for the criticizing of critisism I have been giving them. However, I am all for improvement. 
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xaero
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wobly cos 1 shoulder is higher and the oposite hip is also higher
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