Castle Paradox

Eggie · Joined: 12 May 2003 Posts: 904

This is Lucied, version x.x

I took away the black lines to see how good I do without them. I guess it's not terrible. Maybe half-decent.

Ysoft_Entertainment · Posted: Tue Apr 27, 2004 7:25 pm Post subject:

yo eggie, my friend, sup

anyway to make my point

your graphic is good, however you might wanna make black outline you know

study final fantasy h graphics, they will give you an idea.
one more thing, his sholder is a bit awkward(the right one)

thats it from me
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Hunter Green · Posted: Tue Apr 27, 2004 7:29 pm Post subject:

Also you should consider having the head be viewed from the same angle as the shoulders.
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Iblis · Posted: Tue Apr 27, 2004 7:34 pm Post subject:

If the little things coming off the sides of the head are supposed to be ears, then they should be bigger. Right now they look like tiny little horns or something. If you didn't have a green background, it would be a lot easier to tell where his shirt is. Also Lucied is a character from Wild ARMS.

Shadowiii · **It's been real.** Joined: 14 Feb 2003 Posts: 2460

A good way to fix what hunter was commenting on is to simply move the nose a little to the right. That will give the illusion of 2/3 view with the face.
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Eggie · Joined: 12 May 2003 Posts: 904

Flamer · Posted: Fri Apr 30, 2004 5:09 am Post subject:

i say keep the body (shoulder downwards) and try redesigning the head to match the angle of the bady.
like make the nose of the character overlap the chest a pixel or two and... yeah... just needs redesigning.
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Eggie · Joined: 12 May 2003 Posts: 904

I have changed the direction of his face so it matches his body. It's kind of awkward because no one would normal walk that way. Oh well... it's my game...