Castle Paradox

[Ysoft_Entertainment]

ok, here is maptiles of a house I am drawing for pokemon war, based on the original pokemon red/blue/yellow house.
well, tell me what you think
I want you to critisize the two-story one, since I am not yet done with the one story.

any suggestions(besides dropping the pokemon war game)

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[SunsOfFlame]

I remember pokemon. I played it before it was a fad and dropped it before it became one, hah. I must have been like 10 then...is that right? I'm 14 now. But you specifically said not to advise you to drop the game, so I won't, lol.

I remember the houses, and those look like em. I think they were brick in pokemon, so that might be it.

The roofs (rooves? how do you say that plural??) go from a fair red to a DARK DARK red. I recommend making this change more subtle.

Also, if you designed the tiles right, you ought to be able to make the one stroy right with the twostories tiles.

I like the window effect.

Maybe make the wood have grain? Or give the roof shingles? Maybe you want it simplistic, though.
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[Kenji Murasame]

I'll just be right to the point.

It's way too dark!

[Flamer]

lighten up the place, it's not cloudy everyday
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If we were a pack of dogs, IM would be a grand Hound, CN would be a very ficious little pitball, and Giz...well, it doesn't matter breed he is, he'd still be a bitch
(no offense to anyone that was mentioned)

[Ysoft_Entertainment]

for some reason, I always use dark colors, don't know why, but I think it looks better.

I can of course make them lighter, its no problem.

but thanks for the C&C.
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[Ysoft_Entertainment]

alright, I finished the house, tell me what you think of it now(again the 2 story one)

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[NeoTA]

rotate the texture on the topmost surface of the roof 90 degrees and it'll match much better with the sides
texture in the wood seems somewhat random -- make a more obvious pattern.
could benefit from being bigger, it looks more like a 1 room cottage currently(?)

[Battleblaze]

Great Odin's Raven! howdoyoumakemaptileslikethatdoyoujustmakethem inhouseorimportthemfromapaintprogramandwhatswithgrasstileImustknow howtomakeit!

Sorry just had to get that out.

Anyway the lighter tiles look better, but I think you should keep the dark version on another mapset. Not everyday is cloudy, but not every day is sunny. I also advise to make more house designs. It may take some from the pokemon feel, but Red/blue/Yellow were so FREAKIN monotonous I would have spat on the game if I didn't want to catch Mewtwo so bad. But those days are over. So you could choose to stay true to the games and make super annoying maps that CP will attack you for, or make the game better.


Beware Ysoft your making a fangame...
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[Ysoft_Entertainment]

the grass is going to be changed, it was placed there to show off the house.

and ye, I will make maybe 3 different houses,
or more, just change the color of the roof, and I think I can come up with more houses that way.

as for CP hating me, I don't care, I am sure lots of 10 year olds will enjoy this game.

the story is this, CN takes over pokemon world, and you have to beat him by collecting the 8 seals.
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