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Moogle1
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 Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2004 5:19 pm Post subject: Betcha didn't know I can draw... |
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Character sketches for a game that is yet a long way off. On the left, we have Karl, a down-on-his-luck thief. In the middle, Lune, the sorceress of the moon, Luna's avatar on earth. On the right... he doesn't have a name yet. He's a bad guy. His face came out a bit dark on the scan.
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Komera
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| Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2004 5:34 pm Post subject: |
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i think karl needs to look a little scruffier to look like he's down on his luck.
lune's dress is a bit boring. i've never been much for mono colored dresses. it reminds me of what old ladies wear to church on sunday. needs a second color.
bad guy needs to hold a club... or a gun... or ball his hands into a fist. i like the pose, though it looks like he just jumped off of something and landed on the ground while saying "did i scare you? huh? did i? huh?"
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Moogle1
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| Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2004 5:39 pm Post subject: |
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| Actually, I don't like Lune's clothing very much either... I'll probably change her design. She was just second on my sketchpad. I need to scan the others in. |
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rpgspotkale
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| Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2004 11:09 pm Post subject: |
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Ummm...well...umm...huh...I like the shading...but umm...( Just kiding)
It looks like you have some potential...
I agree the dress is boring but I like the way the bad guy stands!!
Put a gun or a sword or something in his hands though...
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jabbercat
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| Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2004 11:24 pm Post subject: |
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| Your atonomy is perfect. Faces are over styled for me. Very Good. |
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Eggie
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| I really like what you did with the third one's hands. It looks almost perfect. You do noses and preportion really good. I agree wit' Jabber, you do anatomy good. |
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xaero
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| Posted: Sat Jul 31, 2004 1:25 am Post subject: |
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i knew u could draw, anyone can draw, but the question is, can you draw good?
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Orion
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| Posted: Sat Jul 31, 2004 4:38 am Post subject: |
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Yeah. That's cool looking.
I think it'd look neat if you'd mess up Karl's hair.
Messy hair always looks so awesome (If you do it right.)
Keep it up.
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