Castle Paradox

Redmage18*** · **Has left** Joined: 28 Aug 2003 Posts: 126

So here it is as I posted it up before:

And heres a couple others:

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LeRoy_Leo · Posted: Sun Nov 21, 2004 9:32 am Post subject:

Hey! Not bad at all! Especially the first one (of what's his name from .hack the first series)
The second one's eyes are a little too far to the side (too far left) to look real (looks like a horse), but the other two are fine. The third one's eyes are HUGE, but that's not a bad thing. The head has an intriguing shape. It's probably just style, once again. You don't mess with style.
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Redmage18*** · **Has left** Joined: 28 Aug 2003 Posts: 126

Thanks.
You are right though.
That is because I drew it on the computer with paint.
Boy was it hard.

Squall · Posted: Sun Nov 21, 2004 11:45 am Post subject:

One the first picture, the highlights on the hair look like they're there because you know hair is supposed to have highlights, but you don't know where they actually go. Also, spikey hair would make a spikey shadow. A word on the lines, it looks kind of sloppy, but it could almost be mistaken as a particular style you were aiming for (and who knows, maybe you were) so it's ok.

The second picture is not too interesting. It doesn't really look like you put much effort into it, so critiquing it won't do much good.

The third picture is similar to the second, in that it looks like it was made very quickly. The eye is waay too slit and the overall pose looks awkward.

And what is a dictective?
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Redmage18*** · **Has left** Joined: 28 Aug 2003 Posts: 126

There was a specific stle I was going for with the first.
I spelled Ditective wrong did'nt I?
Ooopsies!! Exclamation

RedMaverickZero · Posted: Sun Nov 21, 2004 2:26 pm Post subject:

The greatest thing about drawing is no matter how good you get, you can always improve. Heck, I'm sure some of the best artist's here learn a thing or two everyday. And there's always room for improvement.
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Redmage18*** · **Has left** Joined: 28 Aug 2003 Posts: 126

I agree RMZ. Big grin

LeRoy_Leo · Posted: Sun Nov 21, 2004 8:00 pm Post subject:

RedMaverickZero · Posted: Sun Nov 21, 2004 8:09 pm Post subject:

Heck, look at some of the things people draw for their backdrops in their OHR games. Where do you think the majority of them draw em? MSPaint. And if you're gonna draw the human figure, study up on some cartoons. They draw quite loose, so you don't have to make sketchy lines. I developed my own unique style based on that of cartoons.
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Redmage18*** · **Has left** Joined: 28 Aug 2003 Posts: 126

Roger wilco RMZ. Big grin

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Moogle1 · Posted: Mon Nov 22, 2004 5:14 am Post subject:

It's spelled detective, not ditective and certainly not dictective.
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rpgspotKahn · Posted: Mon Nov 22, 2004 5:20 am Post subject:

These pictures are pretty good. I was quite suprised in comming into this post thinking it was going to be one of those stoned and smashed Redmage posts. But It was good.
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LeRoy_Leo · Posted: Mon Nov 22, 2004 5:36 am Post subject: