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Eggie




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Posts: 904

PostPosted: Tue Aug 30, 2005 5:00 pm    Post subject: Error Tracking Reply with quote

This is a song I wrote. A while ago, I wrote a song. A song about Teen Angst / Suicide. Through this new song I am showing you that I am not a completely depressed hateful teen, and I don't take song-writing too seriously. This is a funny song, about how the song does not exist.

So, read, enjoy, comment. It has a little bit of waste-lining, and isn't perfect... but, hey. It can be improved.

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<Error: Track Missing>
By Ryan Schieckoff

What you're hearing is an illusion,
To wrap you up in confusion,
You think you're hearing guitar, bass,
Something to put a smile on your face,
No, this song is too bad to be true,
So don't let these lyrics get you confused,
Just walk away, don't get yourself used,
Just walk away, don't get all amused,
Trying to take a dance? Halt yourself,
Gonna buy this single? Halt your wealth,
Don't turn around and think what you're missing,
You're not missing a thing 'cause this song's not existing,
This song does not exist,
You can't rate it...
This song does not exist,
You can't hate it...
This song does not exist,
You can't rate it...
This song does not exist,
You can't hate it...

You can hear the melody,
You can feel the music,
But nothing is there... nothing is there...
You think it's real,
You think you're right,
Just try not to care... try not to care...
This song is not a hit or miss,
This song does not exist,

You never heard a song like this before,
Because this song is not made,
Just turn off your TV or radio or sumthin',
And let your fake memories fade,
Try your best to like this song,
Because likin' nothin is sort of wrong,
This song is not on air, not there,
Stop singing the lyrics, stop there,
Don't tell your friends about this track,
You would simply be twisting the facts,
You'd be lying with a solid lie,
They know this song's unexistent, don't try,
This song is not about love or peace,
About Bush or how the war must cease,
Or about world hunger or famine relief,
It's about nothing... capiche?

You can hear the melody,
You can feel the music,
But nothing is there... nothing is there...
You think it's real,
You think you're right,
Just try not to care... try not to care...
This song is not a hit or miss,
This song does not exist,

You think you're in an alternate universe,
As you finish the third and final verse,
Where exist is not, and not is exist,
You scream and yell with a closed fist,
I know what you're thinking about all this,
A non-existent track, huh? So square,
Of course it doesn't exist or live,
But it has a copyright, so there,

You can hear the melody,
You can feel the music,
But nothing is there... nothing is there...
You think it's real,
You think you're right,
Just try not to care... try not to care...
This song is not a hit or miss,
This song does not exist,

You can hear the melody,
You can feel the music,
But nothing is there... nothing is there...
You think it's real,
You think you're right,
Just try not to care... try not to care...
This song is not a hit or miss,
This song does not exist,
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LeRoy_Leo
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 30, 2005 7:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Excellent. You fixed the problems I saw earlier.

All it needs is some sweet background music. The lyrics can be half sung, half atonal (rapping). This is still very humorous and creative. I will admit that it gets a bit repetitive, though. :p
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