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Leon
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 Posted: Thu Dec 08, 2005 6:23 pm Post subject: Please, just open your eyes! |
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wat?
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LeRoy_Leo
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Most superb. There are points that are quite descriptive, but they are battered by parts which seem rushed to me. The story reminds me very vividly of my most favorite game, World Of Warcraft. I can see this happening in a movie trailer, or something of an introduction of sorts. Give yourself a pat on the back. Work on the flow of events a bit. That's all I can say. Well presented.
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Mike Caron
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Actually, those would be the events of the last mission of the Undead campaign of Warcraft III: Reign of Chaos. (Doesn't Kel'Thuzad do the summoning?)
Very nice, it's presented in a way that makes me want to hear more about these characters. Me likes!
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