Castle Paradox

Battleblaze · Posted: Fri Apr 21, 2006 6:59 pm Post subject: Back In Black..er Grayscale

Well back to the basics kids. I drew this up today. Usally I'm pretty mad and sarcastic but this picture makes me happy (like[i] skip around happy[/i]) for some reason. Its kinda scaring me.

Her right eye is slightly smaller...It was already inke dbefore I noticed it.. oh well.
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Bob the Hamster · Posted: Fri Apr 21, 2006 8:26 pm Post subject:

The hands are terrible, and the position of her mouth is off. (too low, relative to the nose and chin)

But in spite of those flaws, I really like this. You did a good job on the eyes and nose, the shoulders and neck are great, and the hair is fantastic.

Feelin Glad indeed! :)

LongeBane · Joined: 03 Feb 2003 Posts: 312 Location: Tomorrow

Also eyes are differently shaped, eyebrows not symmetrical, chin/cheeks also oddly shaped, and that mouth just bothers me. I tried covering that mouth with my finger, and the rest of the picture looked ok. The minor issues (except for the mouth) are are easy to fix, and once fixed will yield a possibly glorious picture. Almost there.

Battleblaze · Posted: Fri Apr 21, 2006 9:31 pm Post subject:

The Hands are Terrible. This made me laugh I think I'll make it my new sig.

But yes they are.I usally draw hands simplified or in a fist so I went on a limb with the hear shape, and fell off. For some reason I keep making my mouths low, be it because of Ichigo from "Bleach" or because I watched DBZ and all the mouths were really high and I'm trying to avoid that style all toghether. But I'll try and fix that. Its almost like the manga style discourages drawing in lips...even faint ones. And I heart pouty lips..this sux.

My style these days seems to be driting tword the seldom known manhawa style. And no more one stroke manga noses.Uh be back in an hour or two I've got more stuff one the way.
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The Wobbler · Joined: 06 Feb 2003 Posts: 2221

Battleblaze · Posted: Fri Apr 21, 2006 11:29 pm Post subject:

Its Korean Manga. Its just less big round and fantastic.
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