Castle Paradox

VirusTalent · Joined: 01 Aug 2006 Posts: 37

I am VirusTalent... and I cant really do anything with the OHRRPGCE... but I have great ideas, and want to make em into a game! Ill give you the storyline and all that if you want to help me.

---Cha-Ching!

Valigarmander · Posted: Tue Aug 01, 2006 7:36 pm Post subject:

Okay.

VirusTalent · Joined: 01 Aug 2006 Posts: 37

You want to help me?

Fenrir-Lunaris · **WUT** Joined: 03 Feb 2003 Posts: 1747

Tell us more. Instead of asking if we want to know, tell us a few things about your game that may convince us to try it out. Will there be any unique battles? Do you have any previous experience writing or drawing?

Valigarmander · Posted: Tue Aug 01, 2006 7:40 pm Post subject:

VirusTalent · Joined: 01 Aug 2006 Posts: 37

Well... ive tried to make a few games... here is the intro (sposed to be said by a girl in the beggining) I was typing up a few days ago.

"You are a mutant, fused with the powers of wind. Your crow futures are your key to the chest of power inside you. You must use your powers, your beak, your wings, and even the feathers on your back and the top of your legs to scale the walls of the demonic aura, surrounding the dark world. Darkness has overstayed its welcome. Send it back... Piine. My son."

Then you wake up in a hospital.

The cool part (I think) about this game is that you are to go through the game without more than three people in your party (including yourself) and that they both come in a few worlds before Dark Sn. (Sn is the final bosses name)

Anyway, tell me what ya think.

Valigarmander · Posted: Tue Aug 01, 2006 7:50 pm Post subject:

Sounds cool. I'd talk more but I have to go right now! (DOC APPOINT) bye.

Valigarmander · Posted: Wed Aug 02, 2006 6:35 am Post subject:

Sorry about my last post, I had a place I had to be. So, what's new pussycat?

VirusTalent · Joined: 01 Aug 2006 Posts: 37

Whats new? Well, here is a look at town one and more intro.

###INTRO###
"You are a mutant, fused with the powers of wind. Your crow futures are your key to the chest of power inside you. You must use your powers, your beak, your wings, and even the feathers on your back and the top of your legs to scale the walls of the demonic aura, surrounding the dark world. Darkness has overstayed its welcome. Send it back... Piine. My son."Then you wake up in a hospital. A man is making an electricity bolt, but stops when he notices you. "Ahh, your awake! We thought you were dieing, so we brought you here. This is the city of Rokk." The man says. You look at your hands, and notice that they are a red-purple-grey color.You look up at the man yelling "did you do this too me!?" There is scilence. You look closer at the doctor, he is made of rocks. "No" he says. "The 4th grand preist did". "Fourth grand preist?" you say. "I thought there was only three!". The man smiles. "Why dont you find out yourself. Travel through the 8 worlds and meet her your---" The man says, but you cut him off "I cant. I have to scale the walls of... some demonic aura... or as my head keeps repeating...". "Then you must take this" The doctor says, and he gives you an odd weapon, in the shape of pliars. You swing it, and the blade comes over the top and onto the hospital tray infront of
you, slicing it in two. "Now, choose what other weapon you want." He holds out a gun and a bar in the shape of a G. "They are both equily effective, but one is more effective against monsters
(gun) and the other more effective againts humanoids and humans (Ghandle)"

###INTRO END###

Once you choose your weapon, you can get up and leave the hospital. In the south area of Rokk, there is the hospital
(Inn), a monster zoo, and a house. There is not much to do here exept battle monsters and look
for treasures. If you go north, there is a shop and an NPC that will give you 100AC. AmberCoins
(AC) are the money used. Symbol is a small A over a small C. The town is all brown and all NPCs look like they are made of rocks, because they are.

Valigarmander · Posted: Wed Aug 02, 2006 9:38 am Post subject:

Sounds interesting, but I've just gotten working on a game of my own (Paxia) and I don't know when I'll be done. But if you ever need help (graphics, music [ok, not music, i suck at music], that sort of stuff), just give me a call.

Good luck! Happy

VirusTalent · Joined: 01 Aug 2006 Posts: 37

Well, I need a Graphic Artist and a Plotscripter. Then we are ready to take off. I will make the title screen, and the name im thinking of is "The Worlds Are Walls"

VirusTalent · Joined: 01 Aug 2006 Posts: 37

The logo for The Worlds Are Walls. Tell me what you think. Also, Elelment set! Wattar (Water), Firre (Fire), Grach (Grass), Wind (Wind), Crow, Rage, MutntRge (Mutant Rage)

TwinHamster · Posted: Thu Aug 03, 2006 7:50 am Post subject:

Please use a different font. And a better rearrangement of the words would also help. It's pretty hard to read the title.

Slime · **Objection!!!** Joined: 27 Feb 2005 Posts: 170

Hmm..I can make ya a monster graphic here and there. PM me if you're interested.
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Valigarmander · Posted: Sat Aug 05, 2006 12:22 pm Post subject:

Your title is cool. However, it's still too hard to read. Use a different font, rearrange the letters differently. And maybe add something to the background, it's a little bland. Hope I've been helpful.