Castle Paradox

Battleblaze · Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2007 1:57 pm Post subject: Hope This DOsen't make me emo but

Seems as though I've fallen in love with the Rule of Rose videogame. Yes its a survival horror...Yes I know its werid...you know what *points to that one dude in the crowd*? Fuck you

Diana and an OC for my Fanfic, James.

Notice the one's genuine intrest. Notice the other's "why are you alive" expression.
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Jack · **the fool** Joined: 30 Jul 2004 Posts: 773

is he touching her privates?

and why is Diana's neck all flabby like.
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Joe Man · Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2007 4:06 pm Post subject:

I suspect it's a whack at drawing a collar bone. A dismal one.
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Uncommon · Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2007 4:28 pm Post subject:

Him touching her "privates" is unlikely. He's certainly not bending down far enough. Her breasts, however, is highly possible, though I'd imagine she'd be more annoyed than pictured.

Newbie_Power · Joined: 04 Sep 2006 Posts: 1762

And this is a fanfiction...

I think "emo" is the wrong word to describe Battleblaze right now, heh.
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LongeBane · Joined: 03 Feb 2003 Posts: 312 Location: Tomorrow

Her expression kind of confuses me. Her eyes says she's tired yet the brows contradict. Then the mouth really is out of place compared to the two. Or am I somehow seeing this the wrong way? There's no other way I could see this. I kind of see where you want to be, but didn't quite get there.

Iblis · Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2007 10:51 pm Post subject:

This isn't a bad drawing overall, but there's one thing here that really annoys me: the lips are clearly open since we can see their teeth, but then the outline of their face is drawn in a way that makes their lips look closed. I see this all the time in anime and I don't know why people draw it this way, it makes no sense.

The girl's ear is WAY up high. The ear should extend roughly from the top of the eye to the bottom of the nose (in this style I would expect it to be a bit smaller (like you've drawn it), but still should be in the same general area).

The shading is nonsensical. The girl's eye shows a light source on the right side, but then the back of her head is in shadow. And then the back of his head is in shadow too, even though that's on the opposite side.

Are there sticks or something in the guy's hair? Toothpicks? What are those and why are they in his hair?

Also everyone hates original characters in fanfiction.
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Fortis · Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 4:35 pm Post subject:

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Chenzi · Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 12:06 pm Post subject:

Chris Hansen: Why don't you have a seat?

(lulz, CP means moar than just Castle Paradox)
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