Castle Paradox

[King Sasuke]

I will be needing help on Yo Ghost, I made the disscusion here rather than New Member because well I'm not new anymore.
Any critizizing saying I did good or whatever will be accepted(Of course).
I will try to update Yo Ghost once every week.
So please lets start the conversation!
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Sasuke the Ninja.How cool am I!

[Meatballsub]

I played it. In my opinion, it is better than some of the stuff newer members pump out. I feel like your graphics already have a hint of your own personal style, which is what you can build on over time.

I have a few suggestions for you. First, it is always fine to ask others what they think about your game, but don't do it too often. Instead, I would recommend asking for a few members here to volunteer to playtest your game before a release. You can communicate back and forth with these members about questions, comments, and suggestions that they might have, as well as any bug fixes that should be mentioned. If nobody volunteers for the task, then consider me one of your testers. I would be happy to help you out. It isn't very often that we get new members around here.

At the very minumum, at least run through your game a few times before a release, and take special note of the text boxes. Your game is plagued with many spelling and grammatical mistakes that could have easily been caught before going live. You should either review it yourself, or even get a family member to take a look at it for you. Of course, if you decide to use play testers, they can review it as well.

I would also recommend playing through other OHR games and studying their graphics. You can blend some ideas and techniques that you see with your own which usually results in improved work.

If you have any other questions or comments, just let me know.

[King Sasuke]

Thank you for yor advice Meatball sub. I will do that.


Yo Ghost is a slow go so far, I've been playing the new RuneScape.
I will get back on Yo Ghost.
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Sasuke the Ninja.How cool am I!