Castle Paradox

Eggie · Joined: 12 May 2003 Posts: 904

Well thanks to the critisism and mindless bashing I have decided to upgrade my art a bit. The shading is a little better and relatively overall better. Here's the catch, it's not quite done yet. So sit back and get ready to critisize and bash some more, because that's what people like to do.

Eggie · Joined: 12 May 2003 Posts: 904

Minnek · Posted: Tue Sep 23, 2003 7:54 am Post subject:

I like it. Very nice. The clothing looks pretty good - the only thing I can see "wrong" about it, is the neck and the head. But as you stated in the last review of the drawing (v1.0, I should say) that's probably intended. The shading is nice, it helps everything's look. I'm not much of an artist, in fact I'm horrible at it... but I still try to help Oookay...

Well, that's my two cents. Exceptional work Big grin

Squall · Posted: Tue Sep 23, 2003 8:40 am Post subject:

Ok, first off, the biggest problem I have with this one (although it's a lot better than the last one) is the skeleton. This picture's skeleton looks like this:

Notice the spine. See how it's all...diagonal? By straigtening that up a bit, the overall picture will look a lot more sturdy.

Also, the distance from the shoulder to the elbow and the elbow to the wrist should be about the same, this picture looks like he got both his hands shot off in 'Nam.

Overall, I'm very impressed with the progress you've made since the last picture, but you still have some work to do.
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Shadowiii · **It's been real.** Joined: 14 Feb 2003 Posts: 2460

His pants are not on backwards. You win a cookie.
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MultiColoredWizard · Posted: Wed Sep 24, 2003 1:16 am Post subject:

Work on the Light source and pclothes folds. Also, shorten the legs.

And anyways, criticisors are the people that make you better, you fool. Bashers are the ones who want you to be better. Look at how everyone responded when you said "OMG KARTOON BETTR TAHN PERSPEXTVES STFU. Er.. anyways..

Uncommon · Posted: Wed Sep 24, 2003 5:22 am Post subject:

It looks a lot better, I must say. However, the base of the hood should be from the front of the neck (not behind his head), and his head looks weird (that's probably style-related, though).

Sew · Posted: Wed Sep 24, 2003 7:17 am Post subject:

Better than the last one, I will give you that. Although the face is still kinda off, and I don't really care for the shoes..

~Sew

Setu_Firestorm · Posted: Wed Sep 24, 2003 10:18 pm Post subject:

Take notice, Eggie. Most really horrible art either gets a "yes yes, good show." ....or MCW's the first to comment on the breasts Raspberry!

Most semi-good to awesome art gets picky-detailed critiqued!
You're on a good track, son.
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Grandtrain · Joined: 02 Feb 2003 Posts: 85

You should do something about the face. The head and the body looks like two different pictures cut and paste together.

Eggie · Joined: 12 May 2003 Posts: 904

I hate it. What a minute, that's my m*th*rf*ck*ng drawing! Hmmm... I hate it. Oh, well. It's nice to have some happy comments, not bashing like "Oh! I could drawn that when I was in grade 3!!! I could right it with my dick! I was laid 7 times when I was 6! I reached puperty when I was 7! La! La! La!" Ahem...

Minnek · Posted: Thu Sep 25, 2003 5:50 am Post subject:

Quit quoting me without giving me credit! err...nevermind. I never said any of that, did I... IT'S NOT TRUE! IT WAS ONLY FIVE TIMES! AT THE AGE OF 2!! ... okay... just disregard this post...I'm on a caffeine rush and it's making me stupid (not that I wasn't already) Oookay...

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Eggie · Joined: 12 May 2003 Posts: 904

You're not stupid, ya jes on crack! And, it wasn't you.

Minnek · Posted: Thu Sep 25, 2003 5:57 am Post subject:

Sorry, I'm not on crack. I just have a bit of a problem of hyperactiveness when I ingest too much caffeine. That's all. Big grin

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Eggie · Joined: 12 May 2003 Posts: 904

Before there was some bashing going on. Don't try to tell me that I'm wrong. I'll say it again: "Oh! I coulda drawn that in Grade 3."

Yeah, sure. We would like to see that. Really.

This one is better, but I like the old one. The old one had some sort of bizarre spark.

And, his arms were shot of, but not in 'Nam...

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Jes' Kiddin'!