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Sorcer ...art guy...

Joined: 05 Nov 2003 Posts: 11
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Posted: Wed Nov 05, 2003 2:12 pm Post subject: My first post and first artwork on CP! |
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Hi, I'm Sorcer. I work for Minnek in RPGExcel.
This is my first Painter piece, so consider that
This is a painting of Prince Leon from my upcoming game...
C&C welcomed.
And, nice to meet you everyone. I know we'll get along just fine...  |
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Uncommon His legend will never die

Joined: 10 Mar 2003 Posts: 2503
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Posted: Wed Nov 05, 2003 2:17 pm Post subject: |
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Welcome, sir. The CG work is pretty decent, but I don't much like his shoulders, they just bug me a bit. They seem like they should be a bit broader, and the left arm looks like it should be lower than the right, because of how the shoulder is. Just, generally work on the shoulders.
Otherwise, a decent pic, especially if it's your first. |
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Setu_Firestorm Music Composer

Joined: 26 Mar 2003 Posts: 2566 Location: Holiday. FL
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LeRoy_Leo Project manager Class S Minstrel

Joined: 24 Sep 2003 Posts: 2683 Location: The dead-center of your brain!
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Posted: Wed Nov 05, 2003 2:44 pm Post subject: |
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Lol! Not bad, but you work for me too! Heheehee! Ok, nice work. I see you are pretty multi talented. (like most here at RPGExcel ) By the way, Minnek may have promiced you that he would be on around noon (Central, in the US) but he slacked off again, I humbly appologize, and once again good work! _________________ Planning Project Blood Summons, an MMORPG which will incinerate all of the others with it's sheer brilliance...
---msw188 ---
"Seriously James, you keep rolling out the awesome like gingerbread men on a horror-movie assembly line. " |
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madhatter Best procrastinator in all of North America

Joined: 30 Sep 2003 Posts: 322 Location: A boonie town, Ontario, Canada.
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Posted: Wed Nov 05, 2003 2:58 pm Post subject: |
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Awesome CG work, but the face... I dunno, it looks sorta confused. It kind of disturbs me... But otherwise, neato job. |
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Me HI.

Joined: 30 Mar 2003 Posts: 870 Location: MY CUSTOM TITLE CAME BACK
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Posted: Wed Nov 05, 2003 3:46 pm Post subject: |
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Nice pic, excellent CGing. However, one thing bugs me quite a lot. On the hands, the fingers are screwed up. The way the human hand is set up, there is a substantial gap between the index and middle fingers, while the middle, ring, and pinky fingers are closer together. On your picture, the opposite is in effect, and, quite frankly, it doesn't look right. Also, the thumbs need to be longer and set back further on the hand.
Other than that, great work. I don't mind the shoulders, personally, they might be a little too weak, but I think they look fine.
And don't worry too much bout the hands. Hands are one of the hardest things to draw. I've only gotten okay at it by drawing them over and over and over and over and over again. _________________ UP DOWN UP DOWN LEFT LEFT RIGHT RIGHT A B START |
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Iblis Ghost Cat

Joined: 26 May 2003 Posts: 1233 Location: Your brain
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Posted: Wed Nov 05, 2003 4:31 pm Post subject: |
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Wow, very nice CG. For the most part the drawing is also very good. I don't really have anything else to say that hasn't already been said. _________________ Locked
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Grandtrain
Joined: 02 Feb 2003 Posts: 85
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Posted: Wed Nov 05, 2003 5:51 pm Post subject: |
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The CG work, especially on the hair, is very impressive. The proportion seems wrong, though. The head is a bit too big and the arms look too short. |
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Dark SKell Angel über beer drinker

Joined: 11 Jun 2003 Posts: 45 Location: 9th circle of hell : COM
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Posted: Wed Nov 05, 2003 6:56 pm Post subject: |
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Nice pic, but because of the folds on his arms, he looks too round to me. But I really think its nice _________________ Yeah, I thought I was dead too.
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LeRoy_Leo Project manager Class S Minstrel

Joined: 24 Sep 2003 Posts: 2683 Location: The dead-center of your brain!
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Posted: Wed Nov 05, 2003 8:35 pm Post subject: |
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And dont forget, the neck is a little bulky (fat). Looks like he is trying to swallow an ostrich egg. I am not slamming your work, Like I said before, it is quite well done. I also want to point out that it could just be the race the prince Leon is... If he is human, that just wouldnt look right, and all.
Keep up the good work, and accept critisism kindly. People who have been here know what happened to Eggie, and I-forgot-who-else. We certainly dont want that to happen again
(the not accepting critisism thing, that is) _________________ Planning Project Blood Summons, an MMORPG which will incinerate all of the others with it's sheer brilliance...
---msw188 ---
"Seriously James, you keep rolling out the awesome like gingerbread men on a horror-movie assembly line. " |
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Flamer The last guy on earth...

Joined: 04 Feb 2003 Posts: 725 Location: New Zealand (newly discovered)
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Posted: Wed Nov 05, 2003 10:16 pm Post subject: |
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nice work... no need to say anything more about the pic, i think it's good but too rounded. (i won't be able to explain, please don't ask if you don't understand) _________________ If we were a pack of dogs, IM would be a grand Hound, CN would be a very ficious little pitball, and Giz...well, it doesn't matter breed he is, he'd still be a bitch
(no offense to anyone that was mentioned) |
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Sorcer ...art guy...

Joined: 05 Nov 2003 Posts: 11
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Posted: Thu Nov 06, 2003 12:05 am Post subject: Thanks for all your comments. |
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Thanks for all your comments. It has already been brought to my attention by the critics at artcorner.org that his arms are a bit to short.
My primary goal was to get a clean CG, and I'm very satisfied with the piece. But thanks for your comments anyway, it can help me get better in the future. In fact I'm working on another piece right now for your eyes to see...
LeRoy: Me work for Minnek!
Flamer: I don't understand what you mean about round...
Anyone else who thinks the picture is kinda round and who can explain what they mean about this???
Thanks anyway, everybody. _________________ Yes, there were times,
I'm sure you knew.
When I bit off more than I could chew.
But through it all when there was doubt
I ate it up and spit it out.
I faced it all
And I stood tall.
And did it my way!
- "My Way" - Frank Sinatra, Elvis Presley, Herman Brood, Paul Anka, Robbie Williams and now me. |
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Grandtrain
Joined: 02 Feb 2003 Posts: 85
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Posted: Thu Nov 06, 2003 3:37 pm Post subject: |
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I think the roundness comes from how you draw the fold lines. |
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Megumi Crazy Kitsune

Joined: 06 Jul 2003 Posts: 46 Location: In front of a computer
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Posted: Wed Nov 12, 2003 12:05 pm Post subject: |
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Very nice coloring, but needs work, on proportion especially. _________________ When the earth fails to satisfy, where else can we look but to the sky? |
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Kenji Murasame Shizuma

Joined: 06 Nov 2003 Posts: 103 Location: ON TO
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Posted: Sat Nov 15, 2003 7:35 am Post subject: |
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again, I must stress, motion, pose.. characters shouldn't just stand there so limp... use their body to show their character!.
If you learn how to do it it'll improve everything else. |
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