Castle Paradox

Sorcer · **...art guy...** Joined: 05 Nov 2003 Posts: 11

http://home.no.net/ryuujin/MyChar_Elore2.jpg
The newest and my pride. I think it turned out pretty well except for the left hand, which were too long or something like that. I'll fix it for the colored version. Happy

http://home.no.net/ryuujin/girlsketch.jpg
Just a study for female anatomy. Turned out ok, I think... Rolling Eyes

C&C wanted.
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Uncommon · Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2003 12:49 pm Post subject:

I already gave you my opinion of the left hand for the first picture.
The second gives me a 404 in some Scandinavian language (Norwegian, I'm guessing, since you're from there).

Shadowiii · **It's been real.** Joined: 14 Feb 2003 Posts: 2460

yeah, 2nd one doesn't work.

Sword hilt needs a little more detail...it was fine until the spikes (spikes? Ow...) and then it looks a bit flat...

More comments later.
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Sorcer · **...art guy...** Joined: 05 Nov 2003 Posts: 11

http://home.no.net/ryuujin/Girlsketch.jpg is the correct adress.
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I ate it up and spit it out.
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And I stood tall.
And did it my way!
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LeRoy_Leo · Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2003 1:21 pm Post subject:

I like the cool blue hue. Heh, that kinda rhymes... Did you use blue paper, or did you flood fill it with blue? Anyway, I like that effect on the girl picture.
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Dark SKell Angel · Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2003 2:26 pm Post subject:

Your pics are cool, but out of the two I like the samurai kid.
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Flamer · Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2003 6:27 pm Post subject:

heh, i like them both...

but Huh?

the guy with the sword has no butt... (it's far too round to suggest it's a butt) and the sword needs a bit of working...
other than that, i feel that pic is perfect for an enime show Big grin

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the girl... he face needs less shading... but i'll discard this.(probably from rubbing it out too much). hands looks good, but it may be a bit long. other than that, i'll say it's a good portait for a red mage.
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Uncommon · Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2003 10:50 pm Post subject:

I think her hat needs to be lower. I understand that the picture is supposed to be. A generally nice picture, that second one is, except for the hat, it just makes her forehead look too big.

Kenji Murasame · **Shizuma** Joined: 06 Nov 2003 Posts: 103 Location: ON TO

First one is quite excellent.

Second one won't load. Oookay...

Uncommon · Posted: Mon Nov 10, 2003 12:29 pm Post subject:

He had to repost the second link. Read the rest of the thread.

madhatter · Posted: Mon Nov 10, 2003 12:59 pm Post subject:

They're both kewl. On the female one, though, her hair doesn't look very natural, kind of like it only had a few strands. Other than that, though, I like them very much. Howdja get the blue effect?

LeRoy_Leo · Posted: Mon Nov 10, 2003 3:28 pm Post subject: