Castle Paradox

Joe Man · Posted: Wed Feb 25, 2004 7:17 am Post subject:

I think you should put his eye back. If not, close it because not very mary people would keep their empty sockets open. I'm not missing an eye but I assume that it HURTS to expose that tissue. He looked better with it anyway. However, like I said before, you're the artist.
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omerta · Joined: 22 Oct 2003 Posts: 25

Joe Man · Posted: Wed Feb 25, 2004 10:34 am Post subject:

Makes sense. Maybye I should study those anatomy books sitting in my room. But, anyway, I still think he looks better with an eye.

Beware. I can find endless problems with nearly anything (exept for this, in which I only found one problem currently) So be glad that I only foud ONE THING that I don't like! :flamedevil:
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omerta · Joined: 22 Oct 2003 Posts: 25

Well, that's the sole reason I post. I prefer critiques and to address concerns. When you spend a lot of time on a project, it's very easy to become acclimated to glaring issues an observer would catch.

Jazz_Man · Joined: 02 Sep 2003 Posts: 248 Location: My basement.

Looks excellent, as always.

One thing that kind of caught my eye (pun intended), is that, well, I'm no artist and all, but it seems a bit odd to me that his back hair happens to be profile with the angle. As in, it seems to just be hovering around the outline in a nice pattern fitting to the camera shot.

Perhaps there's a way to bring splotches of it further out so it doesn't seem so set up and more natural?

But again, I'm no artist. Happy

Joe Man · Posted: Wed Feb 25, 2004 12:52 pm Post subject:

another thing I noticed is that the location of the missing eye looks... strange. That eye always looked unusualy unusual.
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halogrunt001 · Joined: 24 Aug 2003 Posts: 17

I think you should add a background, or at least a pattern, the solid grey looks kind of bland.

Rpeanut · Posted: Wed Feb 25, 2004 6:20 pm Post subject:

Disturbed, yes, but then what isn't. It would look real nice with color and it would also notch up the disturbing factor and haunt my nightmares forever. Ha ha ha!

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LeRoy_Leo · Posted: Thu Feb 26, 2004 7:48 am Post subject:

I didn't think it could be done, but you did it. There is more detail now in that one picture than ever before! I can never look too long at the man though... I always look to the bear for comfort after about 5 seconds. Then I see that it has it's brain showing... That just means there is good detail. Nothing wrong except the eye. Give it an eye patch.
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omerta · Joined: 22 Oct 2003 Posts: 25

Completed. Final comments, concerns for next time?

Uncommon · Posted: Sun Feb 29, 2004 11:32 am Post subject:

It's very nicely (and impressively) detailed. That worm in his eye is really freaky.