Castle Paradox

[Eggie]

This is my latest. I realized after I was done this drawing that the head is out of place. Just so you know. Constructive criticism is much appreciated, anything else will be not looked upon. Well, except compliments. I took 40 minutes to make this. Yeah, I know, I am a bad person.

[Flamer]

strange, i can't seem to get his left foot to display... i've loaded it a few times and it still won't display... try re-uploading this image...

the shading is good, shows that this guy is meant to be somewhat real, than cartoon. but the shirt and pants is too...perfect...like there's not a crease in the shirt (ironed the shirt onto his body )
i suggest a bit of texture and a few creases here and there.

looks like he's crying, and pissed off. the emotion only shows in the face though... the body doesn't express the same emotion. but this is just me talking rubbish, coz i can't explain this part at all.
(if you see what i mean, you'll understand)

hands need a bit of a touch up, but i'm not one for hands either. your hands can improve with joints and a slightly bigger palm. it's not bad for a hand, but it's not good either. (i'm sitting on the fence in this one)

i'm guessing that's a fireball... add a bit more sharp edges onto the ends of the embers, coz it's too rounded on the edges and kinda says that it's a slimeball. (could be a slimeball, i don't know... )

the gun looks flat compared to the rest of the drawing (the bottom of the barrel was the only exception here) i dunno... i don't like guns, so i'll just leave it at that... but it does look flat.

all in all, the drawing it rather good. it has a few good points to it that makes it stand out.
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(no offense to anyone that was mentioned)

[Eggie]

Yeah, I think that folding is my biggest weakness. I looked at that one Dragon Ball guy's art, but that never really helped. Maybe I should glance again, or glance at something better (or worse).

[Uncommon]

He looks a tad unbalanced. If his left leg were a bit further back...

[Eggie]

Yeah, I looked at that earlier and thought to myself, "Now that just looks f*cked up, but I can't see why..."

Anyway, this was an earlier version of Lance / Eggie. He casted 'Haste' on himself, so he has that funky aura beneath him.



This is my latest.



This is what I draw when I am really excited and hyper. Me with glasses and a lance.



This is me drawing my friend into a werelion-thing. For some random reason I made her a slut. I have another version I'll get to you soon.



Yeah, I know. I have two other drawings than Lance / Eggie. Sue me.


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Wait don't please. I have no money! Well actually that's not true...

[Flamer]

one thing i keep noticing with your drawings, is that they're very squared.
umm...

uhh...

...try drawing circles lightly to represent their arms and body, then draw over those circles.
a smooth drawing, is one that is easier to look at. the latest drawing of Lance looks much better than the lance in the first post. but he has very long legs and a squared body. i meant squared like, he seems to have no stomach or abs.
even the most skinniest of guys show a small belly or small abs.

you've improved yet again, don't stop improving. Everyone has the ability to improve, just keep at it
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If we were a pack of dogs, IM would be a grand Hound, CN would be a very ficious little pitball, and Giz...well, it doesn't matter breed he is, he'd still be a bitch
(no offense to anyone that was mentioned)

[Eggie]

For sha...

Yeah, I do draw circles as limbs, but I connect this funny.

[Shadowiii]

They all seem to be missing their foreheads.
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But enough talk, have at you!

[Eggie]

The reason why that is would be because I make the eyes quite large for he outlay of the face and put them near the top. Thing is that'll never change because it's the only thing that I keep that is original to my past work, the way it started.

[Iblis]

First Lance drawing: His hair is too flat on top for how spikey it is on the sides. The gun doesn't look quite like a real gun, but I'm not sure exactly what need to be fixed. You should probably google images of guns and draw from those.

Second Lance drawing: Attempts at clothing folds are a good start, but they need work. I know from experience that these are pretty damn hard to draw, so don't expect it to look very good for a while. Also his hair doesn't go high enough for how big his skull should be.

Third Lance Drawing: Much better. The hair isn't so flat looking. The gun looks better also but still kinda looks like a toy or something. His legs are maybe a little too long.

Guy with a spear drawing: He needs a higher forhead and taller hair. Otherwise his skull would be a little too small and weirdly shaped. The text around him is stupid and makes me hate looking at the picture.

Cat slut: This is the worst of them. The ears are too small and flat, for one. The mouth is too big. The head isn't shaped right (you can get away with using ovals for human heads, to a degree, but not furry heads). The body also appears to be just an oval. Also, remember that the tail is an extension of the spine. It shouldn't stick straight out from the back.

What you need to do is focus on the characters themselves. Don't waste your time drawing these guns and auras and other crap. Nobody will care about that stuff unless your characters look good.

[The Drizzle]

[LeRoy_Leo]

The very first post with Lance's first picture... I can actually see depth! I am liberated! Great work, Egg!
Sorry. I freak out when I see good fundamentals... Like with hands.
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