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Eggie · Joined: 12 May 2003 Posts: 904

I got a couple more drawings of mine. Hold on for a little bit and I might show you my favourite drawing ever, regardless of how good / bad it is.

This is my friend Blaire. I made her a very slutirifuc cat furry.

Regardless oh what this looks like, he is not (Ewwww) peeing himself (Yes, Hunter I was joking), it's his tail. I made my cousin a cat furry and then I remembered he wanted to be water-elemental, so I made his tail water. Not a good job I suppose.

Great story behind this. One day me, my cousin (male), and my friend (male) went into a forest behind our school and we caught up with two unleased fully grown German Sheppards. Later, after running away, we found huge wolf pawprints beside a large pile of empty beer cans. Hence the Drunken Wolf. I just imagined a big drunk wolf, but then my cousin (male) wanted me to make our friend (male) the drunken wolf as a furry. Stupid ho...

Iblis · Posted: Sat May 01, 2004 7:33 pm Post subject:

First one: See my comments on the last picture you posted of this character. It looks nearly identical to that one anyway. The only new thing is that tail is way too huge.

Second one: What's with the "HOE!" in the background? The clothing folds need to not be so straight. Folds tend to be curved and stuff. The water tail is actually an interesting idea, but I think it would be better if it were in a different position. You shouldn't have to tell the person looking at it that he's not peeing. The sword would look better if it were in front of his right arm, not behind it. His arms also seem a little thin.

Third one: Seriously, what's with this "hoe" thing? Anyway, good job on the stained and torn clothes. They actually look somewhat good. His right arm looks weird held stiffly next to his body like that, especially with him making a fist. Also the left arm is a little too short. This one shows quite a bit of improvement and it looks like there was some actual effort put into it.

None of the text on any of your pictures does anything positive. It's often annoying and almost always pointless.

Eggie · Joined: 12 May 2003 Posts: 904

I always put effort into my stuff. If I didn't I would've never gotten any better, okay?

And the text was just to annoy my friends.

Hunter Green · Posted: Sun May 02, 2004 1:22 am Post subject:

I'm going on haitus. I don't know when I'll be back.
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LeRoy_Leo · Posted: Mon May 03, 2004 6:16 am Post subject:

First: You fixed most of the problems here! YAY!

Second: The water tail is... Strange... Very strange... Looked like he was taking a piss. Neutral

I see you pointed that out, and I would like to point out that you can make it look less like he is peeing by making the tail rise behind him instead of go between his legs. That would look a lot cooler anyway.

Third: I see a lot of depth here. Some may not, but I can.

Detail is better here too. Hoe remains a constant theme.

For a total: 7/10 points and one and a half thumbs up for improving your pictures Razz

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Rpeanut · Posted: Mon May 03, 2004 5:15 pm Post subject:

Overuse of the word hoe is extremely evident, but overall your style' has improved. One thing i don't like that much is the more closer resemblances of your furries to people. They seem in fractions 1/4 animal and 3/4 human, im not sure if you mean it like that but it just looks like people with animal heads and tails.
But still it's an improvement, keep up practice and maybe study how to make a picture flow to make it even better.(the second one seems pretty good, except for the tail, which I would've made stretch up to the top from the back (think spine) with hair visible and little drops of water falling off.
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Eggie · Joined: 12 May 2003 Posts: 904

I am calling them hoes in a friendly way. God, they're not ladies. It's just an insdie joke to upset my friends.

This is a werelion preforming at the 2005 Grammy Awards. Strange? Yes. Original? Uhhh... yeah...

It's funny. At first my signature furry was a wolf, then horse, now lion.

Rpeanut · Posted: Mon May 03, 2004 6:21 pm Post subject:

In my opinion thats much better, I can't see the face but the legs/feet are pretty well done. Happy

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Eggie · Joined: 12 May 2003 Posts: 904

Well, you've seen Lyonixxx at the Grammies (Grammys?), and now he is a graphic.

I am having trouble with the glasses. How would I do that?

LeRoy_Leo · Posted: Tue May 04, 2004 6:26 am Post subject:

The Graphic: Good! Razz

The perspective is right this time. See http://www.castleparadox.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=1929

Note: They are wearing the same clothes. Eggie's favorite colors must be green and blue... Oookay...

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Eggie · Joined: 12 May 2003 Posts: 904

My favourite colours are green and black.

...-!

Anyway, thanks for the postive info. Need more. (Info)

The Drizzle · **Who is the Drizzle?** Joined: 12 Nov 2003 Posts: 432

the left foot needs to be moved back and to the left. The tail is kind of boring and unmoving too. It looks like its just hanging there, which defeats the purpose of a tail. But its pretty sound otherwise. The head is much better than in the wolf drawings, since you don't have to deal with the nout problem. I'm not a big fan of the colors you used for the whole thing but whatever. Good sprite, a huge improvement over, what, a month?
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Uncommon · Posted: Tue May 04, 2004 2:09 pm Post subject:

For glasses, use cyan tones instead of normal eye-tones, and connect the eyes with a line of pixels of whatever color.

As an example, look at my mildly disappointing Feather sprite:

Setu_Firestorm · Posted: Tue May 04, 2004 2:11 pm Post subject:

Can I say something blunt without offending you, Eggie?

Stick to pixel art. You do much better with it. Your paper art isn't terrible, but it isn't anything compared to your pixel work.
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Eggie · Joined: 12 May 2003 Posts: 904

Thanks for the tip, Uncy. I shall soon try this technique out.

And Setu, I understand why you are saying, but I WILL NOT give up on paper work. I don't care if I suck or something like that, I need to draw. No, you don't understand I NEED to draw. Seriously, I don't feel right with out it. If I don't get better, I'll make myself better. I can't go with out a day with out taking a pencil and pay-...per and draw a furry or dude, and I know my drawings are crude.