Castle Paradox

Eggie · Joined: 12 May 2003 Posts: 904

This is me, I guess. Kinda. Tried to draw myself, but I messed up the outlining of the eyes.

This is a graphic that I made. Here name's Zoe.

This is me as a werelion.

Setu_Firestorm · Posted: Mon Jul 26, 2004 6:34 pm Post subject:

That is actually much better. I can see that you're improving through experience.
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RedMaverickZero · Posted: Mon Jul 26, 2004 8:02 pm Post subject:

I agree with Setu. I remember seeing weird art you drew before with horse people or whatever. Anyways, it is better. But try drawing more dynamic poses and you will learn through your own experience how to draw muscles and other parts of the human figure a lot better. Practice makes perfect and you're on your way.
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Velduanga · Posted: Mon Jul 26, 2004 8:03 pm Post subject:

Yes. Improving,The sprite set isnt bad and the human Ryan is better than some of your early stuff, but seriously thats the weakest Werelion I have ever seen ( I mean, compared to Gado in B Roar, come on)
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Sew · Posted: Mon Jul 26, 2004 8:16 pm Post subject:

I think you're sprites are at the right angle to were they could stand you adding a nose. The face just looks so flat. :(

~Sew

Hunter Green · Posted: Mon Jul 26, 2004 9:57 pm Post subject:

Wow. that's actually getting better.

One thing, though, when you do digitagrade legs, all the bending in and otu looks really akward. You might want to straghten those out a bit, just think about how your legs look when you stand on your tiptoes.
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SunsOfFlame · Joined: 28 Apr 2003 Posts: 139

Aw, Hunter, you disapointed me.

Anyway, I never saw your old work, but with everyones comments I can guess you've improved lots, which is great.

I like the sprite more than the drawings, personally, but I agree about the nose. It probably ought to have more contrast between the shades, also.

Anyway, to improve much more, the best way is to go for the dynamic poses, or draw off a photo.

Keep it up, man.
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Hunter Green · Posted: Mon Jul 26, 2004 11:20 pm Post subject:

I dissapoint you? why?
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Ace Falcon · **Hot Blooded warrior** Joined: 27 Jul 2004 Posts: 1

I guess You're known for flaming!

I like the sprites though.
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Uncommon · Posted: Tue Jul 27, 2004 3:44 pm Post subject:

Nah, he's just honest, even if honesty is mistaken for flaming. And you, sir, have an avatar stolen from RPGMaker2000. I automatically hate you.

Eggie, your proportions are still a bit off. They've gotten better, but the self-portrait's legs and the lion's thumbs are too long.

Spriting's not bad, but I must argue with your neon color choices.

MultiColoredWizard · Posted: Thu Jul 29, 2004 3:18 am Post subject:

Most people already hate him from Zant anyways.

Go back to studying clothing folds.. because they're terrible. (they're pretty good on the shirt though)

rpgspotKahn · Posted: Thu Jul 29, 2004 8:45 am Post subject:

Great work Eggie. I like it. But it does stand for quite a bit of improvement...

The hands need to be bigger. Clothing needs work. And that ware-lion does look kinda on the weak side... totally opposite of what he is suppose to be.

But otherwise, I dig it. Big grin

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KainMinter · ***~*** Joined: 10 Jan 2004 Posts: 155 Location: Austin

Much better. Especially the sprites.

About your sprites, The third from the left is really good. I think that would make a very attractive battle stance posture. If I were you, I'd change the first two sprites to make them match that.

Orion · Posted: Thu Jul 29, 2004 12:45 pm Post subject:

Eggie · Joined: 12 May 2003 Posts: 904

Oh my God, this is the most amount of positive comments I ever had. I could kiss some serious lips (if you would wish that.)