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Eggie
Joined: 12 May 2003 Posts: 904
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Posted: Wed Aug 25, 2004 6:39 pm Post subject: |
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Moogle1 wrote: | It looks like a talk show.
Look at where your shirt falls when you sit. Unless your shirt is huge, it goes a little below your belt line.
Also, this is minor, but he's got a weird head bulge on the back (just under the first rise in his hair). He should probably have hair there anyway.
Animal girl is pretty decently drawn, except for the leg. |
It's not a talk show, but who could tell with my lack of background details except for a window that should have a more motioned viewing? It's actually a train that they snuck on to escape danger. Ehh... nevermind. This isn't the forum for that.
The shirt: I drew that with my own visuality, and frankly it is rather large, but that's the way it's supposed to be.
The head bulge was a shrinking of image accident that I never realized. Yes I should have hair back there.
Animal girl? What? You can't tell it's a canine? I don't think it's that hard, but I never really draw fur. I should start.
And Shadowman, I will improve the hair quality, and detail to make it seem more vibrant.
And about how my clothes are drawn on, it wouldn't hurt to tell me how to make them more 3-D. I believe that the shirt needs to be more "outside the body." |
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RedMaverickZero Three pointed, red disaster! Halloween 2006 Creativity Winner


Joined: 12 Jul 2003 Posts: 1459
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Posted: Wed Aug 25, 2004 6:56 pm Post subject: |
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Your wolf looks like a horse... *Neigh?* And to make a bit of advice since because of my project I had to draw wolves. Make them furry. They are wild and uncombed animals. Even a tame and groomed wolf has shaggy hair. Make his cheeks nice and furry. You're going for a wolf not a horse, and you will appreciate your art more because of it's visual similarities and notice your talents getting better. And I agree with Moogle1, your clothes look drawn over the body. There's some food for though  _________________ ---------------Projects----
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Hunter Green About to beat this double head with a pipe

Joined: 04 Feb 2003 Posts: 350 Location: Alternate Albion
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Posted: Wed Aug 25, 2004 7:21 pm Post subject: |
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the problem isn't so much that the hips are wide, (although they look like some kind of creepy fetish thing you overdid them so much), as that you drew "Urkel anatomy". The legs shouldn't take up three quaters of the body preportions, and the torso shouldn't be so small. It's your decision if you want to give her giant breasts and hips (but it is'nt very classy) , but there should still be a little more space between them; I mean barbie dolls have more organ room. Also, I know Fenrir suggested it, but she needs more forehead than you drew her with. She's a wolf, not an alligator. Also the square feet are bugging me. look at some pictures of dog paws or something and try to imitate them more closely. _________________
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Uncommon His legend will never die

Joined: 10 Mar 2003 Posts: 2503
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Posted: Wed Aug 25, 2004 8:20 pm Post subject: |
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Here's a thought.
Instead of making excuses for why it's wrong, why not make it right, eh? |
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Moogle1 Scourge of the Seas Halloween 2006 Creativity Winner


Joined: 15 Jul 2004 Posts: 3377 Location: Seattle, WA
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Posted: Wed Aug 25, 2004 8:48 pm Post subject: |
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No, I said animal thing because she could be a wolf thing or a dog thing or... no, come to think of it, she's probably a wolf thing. (Who said horse, anyway?)
(Edit) As far as clothes go, forget about the wrinkles. Worry about his pose first, then the clothes, then if you feel really fancy, put wrinkles on them. Her pose is excellent (even if she's a little out of proportion), while she wears so little. Conversely, he seems to be made the other way around. _________________
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Hunter Green About to beat this double head with a pipe

Joined: 04 Feb 2003 Posts: 350 Location: Alternate Albion
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Posted: Wed Aug 25, 2004 10:27 pm Post subject: |
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Okay I tried to make some kind of visual showing exactly what I meant by "Urkel anatomy", and this is the best I could come up with.  _________________
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Junair Wiare I wish I'd drawn my avatar.

Joined: 03 Jun 2004 Posts: 89 Location: "A mobile man, Mr. Wiare. Now here, now there."
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Posted: Wed Aug 25, 2004 10:30 pm Post subject: |
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Pretty good (Certainly better thens tuff I draw.  ), just... That guy's posture is like a board, snapped in half. He's well drawn, but his posture is... Off. I don't know about you, but when I sit, I sort of slouch a bit, and my back arches slightly, so the top of my back is closer to the chair then the bottom. Pretanaturally straight, if you see what I mean. _________________ "I do believe your Squid exists. I really do, you know?" |
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Eggie
Joined: 12 May 2003 Posts: 904
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Posted: Thu Aug 26, 2004 11:41 am Post subject: |
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If I'm gonna do clothes folds, I guess it'd be better not to put so much. I tend to go crazy.
And Hunter, that pictures reall f****d up, but I see what you mean. |
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