Castle Paradox

RedMaverickZero · Posted: Wed Aug 25, 2004 6:56 pm Post subject:

Your wolf looks like a horse... *Neigh?* And to make a bit of advice since because of my project I had to draw wolves. Make them furry. They are wild and uncombed animals. Even a tame and groomed wolf has shaggy hair. Make his cheeks nice and furry. You're going for a wolf not a horse, and you will appreciate your art more because of it's visual similarities and notice your talents getting better. And I agree with Moogle1, your clothes look drawn over the body. There's some food for though Oookay...

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Hunter Green · Posted: Wed Aug 25, 2004 7:21 pm Post subject:

the problem isn't so much that the hips are wide, (although they look like some kind of creepy fetish thing you overdid them so much), as that you drew "Urkel anatomy". The legs shouldn't take up three quaters of the body preportions, and the torso shouldn't be so small. It's your decision if you want to give her giant breasts and hips (but it is'nt very classy) , but there should still be a little more space between them; I mean barbie dolls have more organ room. Also, I know Fenrir suggested it, but she needs more forehead than you drew her with. She's a wolf, not an alligator. Also the square feet are bugging me. look at some pictures of dog paws or something and try to imitate them more closely.
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Uncommon · Posted: Wed Aug 25, 2004 8:20 pm Post subject:

Here's a thought.
Instead of making excuses for why it's wrong, why not make it right, eh?

Moogle1 · Posted: Wed Aug 25, 2004 8:48 pm Post subject:

No, I said animal thing because she could be a wolf thing or a dog thing or... no, come to think of it, she's probably a wolf thing. (Who said horse, anyway?)

(Edit) As far as clothes go, forget about the wrinkles. Worry about his pose first, then the clothes, then if you feel really fancy, put wrinkles on them. Her pose is excellent (even if she's a little out of proportion), while she wears so little. Conversely, he seems to be made the other way around.
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Hunter Green · Posted: Wed Aug 25, 2004 10:27 pm Post subject:

Okay I tried to make some kind of visual showing exactly what I meant by "Urkel anatomy", and this is the best I could come up with.

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Junair Wiare · Posted: Wed Aug 25, 2004 10:30 pm Post subject:

Pretty good (Certainly better thens tuff I draw. Happy

), just... That guy's posture is like a board, snapped in half. He's well drawn, but his posture is... Off. I don't know about you, but when I sit, I sort of slouch a bit, and my back arches slightly, so the top of my back is closer to the chair then the bottom. Pretanaturally straight, if you see what I mean.
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Eggie · Joined: 12 May 2003 Posts: 904

If I'm gonna do clothes folds, I guess it'd be better not to put so much. I tend to go crazy.

And Hunter, that pictures reall f****d up, but I see what you mean.