Eggie
Joined: 12 May 2003 Posts: 904
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Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2004 7:42 pm Post subject: Not Another Eggie Story: "Northern Roasted" |
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Okay, you might remember some of my previous creations like Mystic Fate or Get Furry or Die Tryin'. Frankly, Mystic Fate wasn't good 'cause it had no sex (Okay, that's a joke.) I was gonna make a rewrite, but soon dropped the idea, since I never really enjoyed that concept.
About Get Furry or Die Tryin'. I was kinda pissed when I lost it and my Angelfire account deleted it (It has no sex. Why did they demolish it?) Anyway, I have been thinking about a new LONG story about a small teenage boy named Ryan as he builds a love relationship between his human self and a furry girl named Tia. Yeah, I know what your thinking, "All Eggie does is stupid stories where the main character builds bonds between furries and humans." Well, yeah... But I can't say this'll be just that, but it'll have that concept in there somewhere.
Also, I would like to say that I won't have furry sex in this story. Don't tell me you weren't asking yourself that.
And another thing, this story is kind of a zany comedy, so if you read a part of something and think that the idea is stupid, well, I hope that it's like that because there's a joke in it.
What? The name? Oh... It's just representing that this takes place in the Northern Country, Canada.
That's as much as info I can give you currently, but if you have any ideas that would make this story appealing, then give me a shout, but don't hurt my ears.
Just to give you an outlook on this story, I'll add the start of it CURRENTLY, and a little peak.
ENTRANCE:
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Ugh, oohhh... was I awake? My senses weren't all there. It was like I was half-dreaming...
"Ryan?" Somebody called out to me.
"Hello?" I looked around my blurring room.
There was this orange and white figure on the window sill. He spoke to me with his empowering voice that kind of echoed, "Ryan... Dear Ryan..."
"What? What is this?" More senses drained out of me.
"Ryan... soon you'll understand..."
"What?"
"Silly boy... You don't get it..."
"What?"
"I am talking about the next little while..."
"What?"
"Can you stop saying that?"
"Y-yeah..." I blinked my eyes to try to focus, but it didn't work. What was going on?
"Good, now let me say something. Your life is very important..."
"Huh? Who are you?"
"Can you acknowledge my phrases without you acting like you're drugged?"
"Not really."
"Ugh... anyway... Soon, you'll grow physically, mentally, metaphysically, and a whole lotta other ways, y'know?"
"What do you mean?"
"Argh! That's it. This conversation is over." Light filled the room, and then my senses faded out.
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PREVIEW:
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I entered the sandy blue roofed Hall of Resal with Kule in front and Tia behind me. I saw the mirror again, and was mildly amused by the blue-furry wolf staring back at me wearing a white muscle shirt and baggy black pants. I smiled. It was so entertaining for me to see myself as a Sobinite.
"Not bad kid," Kule said as he looked at my reflection, "You look pretty damn good. A little too furry though."
"That's roughly what Elyne said." I replied, moving my arms around, watching my reflection. This was too entertaining. Tia was also beside the mirror, and she was in her tight leather looking like a prostitute. Kule was at the door. I wanted to see him as a human.
"Teehee," Tia giggled, "You're like a child. You're so amused by a simple thing."
"Tia," I slightly snapped, "I didn't grow up in this mystical world of your's. Mine is a lot different. I mean... tek, civilized animals, blue fur... it's all so... odd."
"That's my life you're calling odd." Kule commented.
"Sorry." I apoligized.
Kule walked away from the small doorway and up to the mirror, and entered its area. I saw the tall young man with a rugged beard and spiky hair. I was so interested in him, 'cause he was a machine! His arms were so massive and muscular. He laughed, "Damn, I'm strong."
Tia looked at me and I looked back. She smiled, "Jealous?"
I shrugged, "Yeah, hehe..." I really wanted to be that strong. When I looked at him as a hawk, he didn't look that strong because he had skinny wings and legs.
Kule walked closer to the mirror, and turned around and smiled at me, "Hey, Ryan. Come o'er here."
"What, boi?" I asked, approaching him as he was leaned over, and sticking his tailfeathers at me.
"See that in the corner of the hall?" He asked me, pointing at the mirror. I looked at the real thing and not the refelction on the mirror, and there was nothing there. Was he being an idiot?
"There's nothing there!" I said in annoyance.
"You have to look in the mirror!" He grinned at me, still leaned over.
"(Why?)" I asked silently, as I leaned over and looked. I felt so stupid, "Is this a stupid game of you Sobinites?"
"No..." He got up from leaning forward, "It's my stupid game, ya son of a bitch."
Well, that remark wasn't neccessary, "What's your problem?"
He laughed, "Trust me. You're the one with the problems." I watched as he quickly grabbed the back of my T-shirt, and pushed me into the mirror. I forced my arms in front of my face to protect myself from injury due to the impact of the mirror. What was he doing? What if the mirror smashed and I got cut by the tall shards of glass?
Expecting myself to stop and hit the mirror, it was like I ran into its reflection, and became part of its image. That felt so awkward, I twitched. I looked around to see Tia and Kule smiling. Tia chuckled, "Not bad."
"What?" Upon saying that, my mouth felt kind longer. I took my hands to rub against my mouth, but they hit something in my way, and that... hurt?
I looked in front of my face, and saw a long blue-furred object stretched from my face.
"What the?" I turned around and looked into the mirror, to see myself as a... hu.... man...
I had such a strong feeling, and as I looked at my arms... "Holy Shit!!"
"Bwahaha!" Kule laughed as I quickly checked my body out, which was covered in blue fur and was shaped weird.
"What the fuck is this?!" I questioned, scared that I wasn't a human. I jumped right back into the mirror, and came out a human, and my clothes returned to my originals. I pushed Kule, "What the fuck was that?!" I was kind of nervous.
"Oh Ryan..." Tia giggled, "You are always a riot. Did you not realize that you were one of our kind? You became the blue wolf in your reflection." She came over to me. I didn't feel very comfortable.
"That was some motherfucking messed up shit!" I exclaimed at them.
"Ryan," Kule shook his head, "Watch your mouth." He came up to me, and I stepped away from him. He took my shirt. I freaked out, "Get the fuck off of me!"
I was thrown in again, and like expected, I came out a blue-furred wolf. This time I needed to calm down. I should've enjoyed this. I tried to relax and look at my muscle shirt and baggy jeans. I also had my "JT" necklace. I looked at my legs, my arms, and other places. Well Oh! Come on! You would've wanted to see how furry "it" was!
"Think about turning into a human." Tia remarked.
"What?" Where did that come from?
"Trust me." She grinned. Whatever. I focused my thoughts on it, and then this feeling ran from my brain to my body, and I saw my blue fur vanish into my skin, and my body changed into a humans, as well as my clothes, which was very weird to see. I morphed through thought.
"Now think about changing back." Kule explained. I thought about it, and a same electrifying feeling ran through my body to change my form to the blue wolf. I was amazed.
Kule laughed, "Congratulations, Ryan. You know tek."
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