Castle Paradox

Jjkaybomb · Posted: Wed Sep 22, 2004 5:59 pm Post subject:

I didn't even read all of Calehay's post....shows you all how lazy I am ^-^
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Orion · Posted: Thu Sep 23, 2004 11:02 am Post subject:

It looks like Linkmax... he-he-he! Ha ha ha!

Well... it looks very blocky. Keep plugging away. You'll get better.
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Uncommon · Posted: Thu Sep 23, 2004 11:15 am Post subject:

Criticizing a criticism is only stupid when the second criticism is poorly done. Obviously we both just criticized a criticism of a criticism, but that doesn't mean our criticisms are stupid.

Back to the picture. Buh.

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lethal255 · Posted: Fri Sep 24, 2004 5:25 pm Post subject:

Here, I deicided to fix some of the mistakes a lot of people mentioned, such as his shoulder, his hands and some of the shading. I'm not sure if he looks less blocky, but i hope he isn't

so, what else can i do to make a better picture?
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Jack · **the fool** Joined: 30 Jul 2004 Posts: 773

his boots are still blocky, and his shoulders are kind of iffy also. around the midwaist where the belt comes in looks a little funny because its all just one line, try making the shirt go into the belt or something.

the right hand is good, but the left hand is still a little wierd looking, it might just be because your trying too hard to make the fingers look like they're apart.

on some of the creases on the clothes, instead of just making one line and then making the crease, make it all just one line (like what you did on the right leg)

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Joe_Cool · Posted: Fri Sep 24, 2004 9:45 pm Post subject:

i can't see the difference. why is there a gray curl above his eyebrow? thats weird :flamedevil:
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those gray curls are supposed to be peircings (i think...)
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LeRoy_Leo · Posted: Sat Sep 25, 2004 12:49 pm Post subject:

Ok... The fingers on the new one's left hand are noodley. Like maccaroni.
You can make the touch. It would be fine then. Keep working on dat shading.

Also: Why did you take the bolts out of the boots? Crying

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Gizmog1 · Posted: Sat Sep 25, 2004 11:08 pm Post subject:

I don't know if it's been brought up yet, but I think the stubble around his chin is a bit kind of sprayed in, and doesn't really do anything but make the drawing look messier. I don't know how to make it look any better, but maybe make it a darker color, so as not to be so overshone by the skin. Also, the wrinkles on his clothes look kind of stiff, and arbitrary. The right leg, and arms actually look pretty good in that way, but the left leg, and chest might do with a little bit of tinkering to make them look more like there's a person in them, and how it'd wrinkle around him.

Jjkaybomb · Posted: Sun Sep 26, 2004 6:53 pm Post subject:

Might I ask a question, would you ever hold your hand like that in a normal case? And by the looks of it one shoulder is bigger than the other. Otherwise, this is more or less an improvement. Good job ^^
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Uncommon · Posted: Mon Sep 27, 2004 7:38 am Post subject:

I don't think it's an improvement.
The shading was better on the chest before. It just needed consistent wrinkles. His shoulder is still really bad and doesn't look much like a shoulder.
You cut off the slack on the sword-strap, but it still doesn't look natural. The sword isn't reacting to gravity.