Castle Paradox

[SilentAngel]

Another manga artwork I created...drew this today.



This one took roughly 3 1/2 hours, drawn with ink and coloured with pencils. Critiques, comments, questions, all are welcome.
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[Flamer]

love the water and lighting effects.
love the dress details and contrast.

skin colour is incredibly pale for a night time setting.
sky colouring round the objects (mountains and trees) are a bit sketchy, the water is fine (to an extent).
the hair is incredibly "perfect", but meh...

all in all, good job with everything
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[rpgspotKahn]

That water is really good.

I think the character could be more fat. She seems too skinny.

Perspective is great.

I love the hair.

The dress is nice.

The face seems a bit long...

Well done.
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[Moogle1]

Excellent water. Something like this would take me a million hours to do, so I hate to critique it, but here goes anyway.

Everyone you draw is anorexic. This isn't bad per se, but it's kind of odd.

You did a good job with the right hand (i.e. on our left). Her left hand (on our right) is awkward.

She should be further forward in the water. It looks like she's a giant.

But... yeah, really good. The light reflecting off the hair is a nice touch and the clothes folds are done reasonably well, which is hard to do.
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[LeRoy_Leo]

Everyone has mentioned stuff about that water and the lighting. What I find particularly impressive is the distant objects being misty and blurred. The background looks real, yet the girl needs to be fed.

It's too late now, but I wish the sky had more detail... And yet, this is your best work yet.
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[Uncommon]

Her face bugs me. It feels like her mouth should be a lot bigger, and I think her eyes are a little too far apart.

[Zombie Hunter Green]

You guys are acting like you've never seen anime drawn by a girl before. All girls draw anime chracters freakishly skinny, because it is what they think the ideal woman's body shape would be. Now to you it might look like a concentartion camp survivor, but to a girl who is into anime, that is what the ladies are supposed to look like.

[RedMaverickZero]

Looks real good. But I agree with Uncommon here, her eyes seem a tad too far apart. And the moon seems like it could be just a tad bigger. I like the water a lot. I suck at drawing water so I suppose I can appreciate it. The distant objects look real good. I like the way they get darker the furthur back they are.
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[Gizmog1]

I really really like the landscape in the background, but I agree with Uncommon, that she seems very skinny and two dimensional. The dress is beautifully drawn, but it could just as easily be hanging in a closet as being on a girl, in my opinion. The water, and sky however, are perfectly.

[Shadowiii]

Semi see-through dresses rule, baby.
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