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 Posted: Sun Oct 31, 2004 11:30 am Post subject: Heres a song I thout about... |
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I'm going to make this a music video:.
Prologue /Voice:
The world is veild in darkness.
The sea is wild, the winds stop,
and the earth begains to rot.
The people wait,
their only hope is a prophacy...
When the world is in darkness four
warriors will come...
After long wait four young warriors
arrive each holding a magic ORB.
Guitar starts playing:
Light warriors, Light warriooors!!
run through the land and restore light!!
Light warriors, Light warriooors!!
save princess from garlands darkness!!
Light warriors, Light warriooors!!
stop the fiends and save thy land at any means!!
Light warriors, Light warriooors!!
Light warriors, Light warriooors!!
Light warriors, Light warriooors!!
stop Chaos!! Light warriors, Light warriooors!!
stop the fiends!!Light warriors, Light warriooors!!
Light warriors, Light warriooors!! across thy land is
covered in darkness save the crystals and restore them
to light!! Light warriors, Light warriooors!! Light warriors, Light warriooors!! Light warriors, Light warriooors!!
Prologue /Voice:
now you have bacme thy warriors of light
kill the evil chaos of the night...
I see youi hold thy four ORBS power and light
Kill the evils of the night...
Guitar:
Light warriors, Light warriooors!!
Light warriors, Light warriooors!!
Light warriors, Light warriooors!!
Light warriors, Light warriooors!!
Destroy Chaos!!
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Calehay
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| Posted: Sun Oct 31, 2004 1:54 pm Post subject: Ummm... |
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Would you like me to comment on the lyrics?
If so, you really should to put in rhymes. There are many great songs without rhymes, but it's really hard to do that.
Hopefully your orchestrations you have in mind is more than a guitar (I'm guessing this is pseudo/oldie rock and it's a distorted guitar.) If I'm right, then you'll need bass, drums, and optionally (for that old sound) a synth-keyboard sound.
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Setu_Firestorm
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Uncommon
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| Posted: Mon Nov 01, 2004 7:55 am Post subject: |
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| I think it would work better as power metal than psuedo/oldie rock. |
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LeRoy_Leo
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| Posted: Mon Nov 01, 2004 8:24 am Post subject: |
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Now that's an over the top, true blue FF fan song. Admirable...
But it's not art...  <--
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The Wobbler
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Uncommon
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| Posted: Mon Nov 01, 2004 8:48 am Post subject: |
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| It's not art because...? |
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LeRoy_Leo
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| Posted: Mon Nov 01, 2004 10:04 am Post subject: |
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I will answer your question using the socratic method, good sir.
Here's an interesting question.
What would you define as art, Uncy?
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JSH357
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| Posted: Mon Nov 01, 2004 10:21 am Post subject: |
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"art"- any artificial object that is beautiful or ugly in some manner.
Ugly art being bad art. |
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Uncommon
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| Posted: Mon Nov 01, 2004 10:38 am Post subject: |
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| And bad art still being art. |
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Artimus Bena
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| Posted: Wed Nov 03, 2004 2:27 pm Post subject: |
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I would second setu's post, but I have a couple comments:
Art is expression. Human expression, but tangible. This is not an expression of humanity, or his humanity. Art is something that one can respect because it exists. It's more like a theme song to an old anime; without a purpose. (Just my opinion).
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Artimus Bena
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:p I wasn't comparing old an new, just describing it's feel.
What is he expressing? He has created, yes, but expressed? I fear what we argue here is the difference between opinions of what art is. Two opinions in general: one based in technicality--art is art-- and the other based in standards--art is artful--
:p One can say that part of my reply is artful 
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LeRoy_Leo
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People have either lost the eye for artful posts, lost all respect for artful posts, or maybe there is no such thing as an artful post anymore... What it all comes down to is, be careful how you're posting... And I really should take my own advice and silence this demon once and for all. As for the other people who are getting on the veterans' nerves, I wish you grace.
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