Castle Paradox

Uncommon · Posted: Sat Nov 27, 2004 3:38 am Post subject:

Wait a second...
Destiny, Death, Dream, Destruction, Desire, Despair, and Delirium?
Endless?

Is it just me, or is this sounding a bit like a fangame of Neil Gaiman's The Sandman?

LeRoy_Leo · Posted: Sat Nov 27, 2004 7:42 am Post subject:

Calehay · Posted: Sat Nov 27, 2004 9:31 am Post subject:

I believe he meant the land shattered and flew into space while the oceans were left to no longer exist (My guess would be them freezing, as water tends to do in space.)
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Culex Uzuki · Joined: 25 Nov 2004 Posts: 25

remeber peoples i did say that there was a great void that swallowed the planet tartarus and the lands that shattered were the remains of the planet which float in the sky. and the existaence of the ocean has been long forgotten as well as the planet itself which is now known as the Lost Jerusalem...and i think i will talk to fenix because i never knew he had a game entitled ENDLESS SAGA, so maybe if i talkk with him i could take the name. If not i will stick with Endless Cetus.

Culex Uzuki · Joined: 25 Nov 2004 Posts: 25

here are some info i thought i type up. NOTE: this is not all of the info, just a tad bit of it.

Endless Cetus Saga I

In the time when Oceans still existed on the planet Tartarus, a war erupted that encompassed the entire world. The war was between mankind and the God Origin. The God Origin created the Angels, his most destructive army to fight against mankind. After years of war, mankind was victorious. Mankind confined Origin and his Angels by using the power of 8 Elemental Essences. The war shattered the lands into pieces and floated high up in the sky. The planet was badly damaged that the oceans started to dry up, and that a deadly vortex appeared and consumed Tartarus until it was lost. Eventually, Tartarus was known as Lost Jerusalem.

In an era where lands float in the sky and the existence of Oceans has been regarded as a mere legend. The Nortis Empire is sweeping across the shattered lands in an attempt to capture all 8 Elemental Essences to revive Origin and his Angels, so that they can lead the shattered lands into a rebirth. The other, God-Hand, a terrorist organization want the power of the 8 Elemental Essences to obtain the power of the Angels and enslave every being on the shattered lands.

~~The Characters~~
1.Kizer Renzoken
Age: 18 Wpn: Blood Illusion (Sword)
~~Spirit Drive~~
Eruption Slash
Dragon Wave
Endless Justice
Ultimate End

2.Destiny Nortis
Age: 16 Wpn: Imperial Rod (Rod)
~~Spirit Drive~~
Healing Wind
Kindness Rain
Miracle Tear
Creation Song

3.Tizeru Uzuki
Age: 19 Wpn: Rising Sun (Gloves)
~~Spirit Drive~~
Energy Storm
Multiple Attack
Hyper Tornado
Raging Dragon

4.Rhapsody Vilente
Age: 17 Wpn: Limited Moon (Daggers)
~~Spirit Drive~~
Tough Love
Spiral Slice
Rising Nova
Fallen Hope

5.Juste Strider
Age: 25 Wpn: Cross Punishment (Cross Gun)
~~Spirit Drive~~
Battle Serenade
Angelic Waltz
Final Remix
Last Symphony

6.Culex Balmug
Age: 23 Wpn: Chaos Gospel (spear)
~~Spirit Drive~~
Boost Grenade
Cosmic Arrow
Pirates Wrath
Invincible Moon

7.Nexus Mcloud
Age: 28 Wpn: Dragon Killer (Double Sided Sword)
~~Spirit Drive~~
Cyclone Slasher
Meteor Storm
Explosive Geyser
Demonic Circle

8.Galdo Corel
Age: 32 Wpn: Soul Crusher (Hammer)
~~Spirit Drive~~
Rushing Water
Hells Flare
Absolute Zero
Grand finale

9.Fuben Suzaku
Age: 21 Wpn: Last Crusade (Claws)
~~Spirit Drive~~
Shooting Star
Burning Pummel
7 ways to Die
The art of War

10.Saito Hideo
Age: 18 Wpn: Einlanzer Blade (Long Sword)
~~Spirit Drive~~
Inferno Swipe
Mirror slice
Desperate Measures
No Mercy

~~Non Playable Characters~~
The Nortis Empire
1.President Zodiac Nortis
2.Vice President Cort
3.Supreme General Jhette
4.General Khunzite
5.General Xustalzo
6.General Lestat
7.General Jezuit
8.General Izutsu

The Shimazaki Dragoons
1.Diamond
2.Amethyst
3.Jade
4.Saphire
5.Emerald
6.Topaz

God-Hand Organization
1.Director Nazaal
2.Regent Karasu
3.Regent Seru
4.Regent Legato
5.Regent Hortenza
6.Regent Chapel

The Fallen Angels
1.Bardel
2.Cronos
3.Thanatos
5.Raizen
6.Hyperion
7.Spartacus
8.Zelos

Other Important Characters
1.Elena
2.Caizec Renzoken
3.President Calbren Balmug
4.Lord Ikaku
5.Prima and Lenna
6.
7.

8 Elemental Essences
1.Bolt Essence
2.Water Essence
3.Ice Essence
4.Fire Essence
5.Wind Essence
6.Earth Essence
7.Lit Essence
8.Dark Essence

Spirit Stones and Gigas
1.Aries Stone
2.Taures Stone
3.Gemini Stone
4.Cancer Stone
5.Leo Stone
6.Virgo Stone
7.Libra Stone
8.Scorpio Stone
9.Sagittarius Stone
10.Capricorn Stone
11.Aquarius Stone
12.Pisces Stone

~~The Sky Nations~~
1.Abels Cabal <Colony>
-Midaro Village
-Yasunaku Forest
-Sadaal Valley
-Ludia City

2.Monte Claude <Colony>
3.Balmug <Colony>
4.Neo-Tokio <Colony>
5.Esto Gaza <Colony>
6.Sol Suctum <Colony>
7.Nortis <Colony>
8.Arcadia <Colony>
9.Ishtar Clouds <Colony>
10.Space Station Crux <Colony>
11.Celestial River
12.Other-World Vortex
13.Lost Jerusalem <Colony>
14.Eternal Ocean <Colony>
15.Infinite Universe

Calehay · Posted: Sat Nov 27, 2004 3:59 pm Post subject:

I'm sure there's more than just stopping the God Hand Organization from getting the crystals. If not, you might decide to put in something more and augment a crazy twist (like mabye the God Hand corporation are actually spawn of the God Origin, and they disguised themselves as humans to merely get supporters to get closer to uniting themselves to defeat the humans and exact revenge by making them suffer... but it's your story, write it how you wish.)

And then, why do the God Hand want to cause destruction? This is getting a bit to the bare bones, and you would probably have to get into character personalities to answer that question. Maybe the leader had a bad childhood. Maybe society played an evil trick on him. Just remember these words, for story making and for life.

No one is ever just evil or just good. Black and White do not exist.

Just make sure that a character doesn't do this just cause he's evil, and a character wants to save the world just cause he's good. Real life doesn't work like that. Stories are (hopefully) going to emulate people you would meet (personality wise. I'm not talking like if you have a talking duck or something.) and while it would be nice to meet a person who was all white, we can only hit in the whitish gray area. In other words, remember that the people in your stories are just that, people.
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LeRoy_Leo · Posted: Sat Nov 27, 2004 7:48 pm Post subject:

Iblis · Posted: Sat Nov 27, 2004 7:56 pm Post subject:

Quite a few of those names of characters and attacks seem to be copied from other games. And of course the zodiac stones.
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Culex Uzuki · Joined: 25 Nov 2004 Posts: 25

i have renamed my game to Eternal Origin. I just want to let you guys know, and my first demo release should be around in a month, so stay tuned.