Castle Paradox

[Mushitori Okuro]

Here are 12 girl characters. Next time I'll post the guy characters. I'm planning on making a story but I don't know what medium to use yet to tell the story(webcomic or something.) The first story I want to do is called Feral Fighter Okuro. I don't want to do a animation again because that was very very hard and torture-like.

http://www.moebiusninja.com/~ashen/Francomaru/Character-A.jpg

(The second picture is larger so I will just put the link to it:
http://www.moebiusninja.com/~ashen/Francomaru/CharacterFirstDrawing-A.jpg )
6 of these 12 characters are in a group, this one is the leader of this group, she is a firebird. Her power has to do with heat energy.
This group arn't badguys, but they have a different agenda from the main character and this leads to them being the antagonists in the story. '^^ At least for a little while.

http://www.moebiusninja.com/~ashen/Francomaru/Character-B.jpg

If you want to see a prototype picture of this character, click this link:(
http://www.moebiusninja.com/~ashen/Francomaru/CharacterFirstDrawing-B.jpg )
This character is incredibly strong physically(She could handle giant weapons far better than Okuro.) What animal she is will be found out in the story as well as others.

http://www.moebiusninja.com/~ashen/Francomaru/Character-C.jpg

This character is also an Energy user like the Firebird girl, but her techniques are more powerful offensively and she shoots her powers out in beams while the firebird does it in waves.

http://www.moebiusninja.com/~ashen/Francomaru/Character-D.jpg

http://www.moebiusninja.com/~ashen/Francomaru/CharacterFirstDrawing-D.jpg
This character is the shortest one on the team. She is a master of controlling those little creatures floating around her. They can be used in battle and she can command them to create barriers, shoot at the enemy, give her the ability to fly, and other stuff. She can use those creatures in various ways offensively and defensively. Notice the one with its eyes closed. That one doesn't fight at all but talks to her during battle(like the enemies weakness, strategy to use, and other stuff.) Okuro gets two of those creatures from someone else. Their related to a parasitic kind that drain energy from their hosts.

http://www.moebiusninja.com/~ashen/Francomaru/Character-E.jpg

This character has powers of coldness and stuff. Opposite of her leader's powers.

http://www.moebiusninja.com/~ashen/Francomaru/Character-F.jpg
This one doesn't have any powers but has mastered the art of sword fighting. She is the only one that fights using her hidden form. But her sword has powers and she has mastered every single ability of her sword. Heres another picture of her.

http://www.moebiusninja.com/~ashen/Francomaru/CharacterFirstDrawing-F.jpg

She never sleeps since she is in her hidden form so what animal she is is a mystery.

And thats the six that are in a group.

And these other Characters below are not in any group. They work individually.

http://www.moebiusninja.com/~ashen/Francomaru/Character-G.jpg
This character is a normal bird.

http://www.moebiusninja.com/~ashen/Francomaru/Character-H.jpg

http://www.moebiusninja.com/~ashen/Francomaru/CharacterFirstDrawing-H.jpg

You'll find out about this character in the story.

http://www.moebiusninja.com/~ashen/Francomaru/Character-I.jpg

(Click this link to see the first time I drew this character:
http://www.moebiusninja.com/~ashen/Francomaru/CharacterFirstDrawing-I.jpg )
This character is another firebird, but her powers are different, she is physically strong and fights at close range using fire powers.
IM: Still haven't fixed the max post size

[Mushitori Okuro]

Continued, I just found that the post ended after the 2nd firebird character. : (

http://www.moebiusninja.com/~ashen/Francomaru/Character-J.jpg
This one is a cat-like one sorta. She uses a enchanted staff that can create swarms of rodents that walk on air or evoke a giant fish called the Fish Queen. Her staff has far more advanced techniques, but she hasn't taken the time to find those out.

http://www.moebiusninja.com/~ashen/Francomaru/Character-K.jpg
This character is a wolf-like character. Her territory is a desert.

http://www.moebiusninja.com/~ashen/Francomaru/Character-L.jpg
And last but not least, this character. Her weapon is a normal whip. : / These last six characters don't make an appearence in the story I want to do, but they do in the story after.

Oh yeah, Please tell me which out of the twelve characters is your favorite.

[Aethereal]

Well...I don't know which one my favorite is, because I don't have any clue as to what their personalities are or as to anything regarding them except how they look. If I have to pick one based on looks alone, I'd have to go with the one that has the cold powers. I like her hair and outfit.
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[Mushitori Okuro]

Yeah, I like to see people choose what their favorite is when they don't know how the character is like. Then, when they get to know the character, then Id like to see who their favorite is then. : D

[Grandtrain]

Those little creatures are so cute. That have to be my favorite. The rest are also very good. Very unique. I can't wait for the webcomic.

[Shadowiii]

As I've said, Herp, you have a style all to your own. Those pics are rocking!

Your descriptions are lacking, however. Though you tell us each character's roll in the party, you don't tell us about their personalities, so I can't really get attached to one...

But yeah. Bring on the web comic!
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But enough talk, have at you!

[Setu_Firestorm]

You have a pretty good nack for chibi art. I don't know if you'd call it that, but it appears that way to me.

Anyway, great job!
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[Mushitori Okuro]

Personality is something you would have to see from reading the story. I only put a description of their role and powers as you said.

You'll find out their personalities in the webcomic. Its better to show their personalities from their actions than from telling in a description. @_@

I'll post the guy characters next, then colored pictures after that.

[Nagatoki]

My my. Those are some cute characters you have there. Good job!
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[Iblis]

The cuteness.... I'M BLIND

heh, anyway, my fav has to be the last one, with the whip. Second fav would be the one with the giant sword. She looks like she could do some damage.
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[Sew]

The chick with the sword all the way. Thats the kinda chararter I wish to see in a web comic.

[Wolf]

The sword is OK, but I don't like your style. You wouldn't happen to be Herp, would you?

[Chaz VanLanden]

AH!

Very nice very nice.... Cute.... I like the sword!
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[Mushitori Okuro]

Yeah, I am Herp.

[MultiColoredWizard]

None of the images work for me.