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Jjkaybomb
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LeRoy_Leo
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I've seen these earlier today, but I have some late breaking revelations for JJ.
I like the story so far. Seems slightly generic, but not by enough. That dialog has certainly improved from the last sprite comic of yours that I poked my nose into.
Also, I was wondering. The Megaman with a mowhawk character is sort of forgotten after the first couple episodes? Where did he go? To sleep?
And as par request: :flamedevil: :flamedevil: :flamedevil:
~Feed off of those flames.
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Jjkaybomb
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| Quote: | | Also, I was wondering. The Megaman with a mowhawk character is sort of forgotten after the first couple episodes? Where did he go? To sleep? |
He's curently trying to figure out another problem and will turn up in the next comic.
| Quote: | | I'd rather see this drawn, no matter how good or bad your art is. Sprite comics make me die. |
I'm in a learning process, this is actaully helping me to learn how to draw a little more that a tutorial, if not only proportions and shading. Granted, I'm not learning a damn thing about backrounds...
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Uncommon
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You know what would help you learn to draw better than making a bloody sprite comic?
DRAWING.
GET OUT YOUR PENCIL KID. |
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Machu
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A sprite comic that's made of your own sprites would be different. And by "your own", I mean "not an edit of something else".
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Jjkaybomb
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| Quote: | | You know what would help you learn to draw better than making a bloody sprite comic? |
Did you catch the "if only proportions and shading part?"
I'd show you how I've improved in drawing, but I lack a scanner
All I can show you are my OWN pixelated art when I get to my own computer.
And really! This is refreshing! Instead of people telling me it rules, they're telling me that I suck! Woo-Hoo, I needed those beatdowns or else I'd cow over it forever.
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Moogle1
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The sprites are well-edited, but they're Mega Man sprites. I think every sprite comic I've ever seen has used Mega Man sprites. You score an "F" for originality.
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Jjkaybomb
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Well, my custom sprites. Creatis, and then some from my current game project. All are OHR usable. Not perfect, but a helluva lot better than they used to be.
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LeRoy_Leo
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Here we surely have improvement. There is still a long way to go yet, but these are much improved from your previous contributions.
Of course the shading details (Mainly in the pants and some of the other articles of clothing. Some of it is pretty damn good) are most childishly thrown together. Putting shading in the appropriate place is probably an area you can work on. What ever you did worked, because you got better. Just keep it up.
Oh great. Now I feel like this belongs in the art corner...
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