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Ishrie
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Okay, drew some excrutiatingly sketchy guidelines for what I might add onto the clothes..(They're sketchy and sloppy because I'm so very lazy, and didn't want to spend an hour and a half apeice for something I might not end up using.)
((Discriptions are just in case the pictures' quality is so bad/is too sketchy for you to tell.))
For Kamnai, I hacked off one of her sleeves, and added an underskirt(if added, would be the same purple as the sashes). I made the overskirt have a slit(making the underskirt visible)the same V-shape as the boots(thought their design was a little random). I'm considering the necklace designs labeled 1, 2, and 3. Added(in my opinion)a neato bracelet with a loopy chain attatched to a ring.
I gave Tirrin the same neato ring/bracelet as Kamnai, only on his other arm. Gave him loads more buttons, pockets, and the same V-shape on his coat...(I was kinda stuck for ideas... most guys I know don't wear too many accessories, and poor Tirrin looks feminine enough already..  )
 <--- sorry it's so small... photobucket's being weird.. 
Too much(Unlikely, but possible..)? Too little?
C&C on the designs appriciated! 
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The drawins are pretty gud but you could make them look more relaxed. make the caracters more unique. they seem to be the same. givre them funky hair and clothes
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| Quote: | | thay look, act, and sometimes even think alike(saying things at the same time, sometimes being able to "read each other's minds"...) |
Gee. Who does this remind me of? 
That's not something you want to advertise Ishrie.
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I'm lazier, I'll wager.
(Aside: Kei, you're not even trying. I'm pretty sure you know how to spell "good.') |
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Setu_Firestorm
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Well, aside from the eyes being too far apart (and maybe just a tad too big for the head, even for anime), I'd say that that guy's pants look way too tight around the waist.
Other than that, I give you props for getting the proportions looking good. But, you don't have to take my opinion for what it's worth; my art sucks.
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Ishrie
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| Kei wrote: | | The drawins are pretty gud but you could make them look more relaxed. make the caracters more unique. they seem to be the same. givre them funky hair and clothes |
I'll try to make them more relaxed, but I've already said about three times that I wanted them too look very similar.
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Ishrie
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| Sparrowhawk wrote: | | Quote: | | thay look, act, and sometimes even think alike(saying things at the same time, sometimes being able to "read each other's minds"...) |
Gee. Who does this remind me of?
That's not something you want to advertise Ishrie. |
Eh, it's been done? 
Sorry, I had no intention of copying.. I don't have T.V., so I have no idea what sort of new shows are on(If it's from a show/new game, I prolly haven't heard of it.).
And, there's no denying the truth. You guys would've found out sooner or later.
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Ishrie
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| Setu_Firestorm wrote: | Well, aside from the eyes being too far apart (and maybe just a tad too big for the head, even for anime), I'd say that that guy's pants look way too tight around the waist.
Other than that, I give you props for getting the proportions looking good. But, you don't have to take my opinion for what it's worth; my art sucks. |
You're right about the eyes; Sephyroth already commented on that. (I'm trying to fix them right now  ). And thanks for the input on the clothes, I'll try to fix his pants. 
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Ishrie
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Okay! 'Tis the sketchy-sketchy rough!
Worked on Kamnai's pose a bit, fixed their arms, messed with the eyes, and loosened Tirrin's pants a bit.
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This may be picky, but I think the wrists and ankles are kind of thick.
I can't make wrists and ankles just right either.
I also think the design of the clothes is the best part of this. Clothes really make up a great deal of character design, I have noticed.
And there is something about the man's left arm that bothers me a little. I think it is bent strangely. I will note that you hung the cloth on them appropriately now. The woman's clothing and pose are the best. I suggest that you take the way you hung the sleeves with the woman and use that on the man. It looks more natural.
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| LeRoy_Leo wrote: | This may be picky, but I think the wrists and ankles are kind of thick.
I can't make wrists and ankles just right either.
I also think the design of the clothes is the best part of this. Clothes really make up a great deal of character design, I have noticed.
And there is something about the man's left arm that bothers me a little. I think it is bent strangely. I will note that you hung the cloth on them appropriately now. The woman's clothing and pose are the best. I suggest that you take the way you hung the sleeves with the woman and use that on the man. It looks more natural. |
Okay, I'll fix that. (I find it a little ironic that most of the other people said that the clothes were the weak spot.. )
Thanks for the input, and yeah wrists and ankles are one of my superhugeuberbadspeedracerweak-points. ((<---- Don't ask.))
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| Sparrowhawk wrote: | | Quote: | | thay look, act, and sometimes even think alike(saying things at the same time, sometimes being able to "read each other's minds"...) |
Gee. Who does this remind me of? |
She was talking about me and Linkmax.
Because we're twins.
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| Moogle1 wrote: | | I'm lazier, I'll wager. |
No one rivals me in laziness.
No one.
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Moogle1
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The more you are able to do, the lazier you are able to be. I don't do more on a regular basis.
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| Ishrie wrote: | | Thanks for the input, and yeah wrists and ankles are one of my superhugeuberbadspeedracerweak-points. ((<---- Don't ask.)) |
You’re welcome. And I have to say that is the longest most annoyingly awesome thing I have ever read. That's gotta' go in my list of words one should never use at the risk of being disemboweled. It goes right up there with supercooltendo and ultragallactabulous. 
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