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no_shot
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I really liked the song (#2), but the guitar solo just didn't do it for me.
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Setu_Firestorm
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| Posted: Wed Jun 15, 2005 10:03 am Post subject: |
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UPDATE!
http://setu.castleparadox.com/exhiled
Added Tracks 5 "Ever Grateful" and 6 "Deceived"
Download the lyrics if you want to, but since I re-installed Vocaloid Miriam I got the expressions back.
CONS: Track 5 has step recording issues with the timing (mostly in the first verse and pre Chorus). What can I say? I got too lazy to fix it.
NOTE: For track 6, I decided that Miriam had too much fun (=P) doing all the vocals, so I did all my own for "Deceived".
Hope you enjoy! These are 6 tracks out of a planned out 10.
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jabbercat
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| Posted: Thu Jun 16, 2005 2:54 am Post subject: |
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Setu, I demand a tabs/sheet music book ASAP! =P
Are all of the guitar parts in Standard tuning? |
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rpgspotKahn
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| Posted: Thu Jun 16, 2005 4:18 am Post subject: |
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I just don't think the vocals are too good... sorry, though the music is great.
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phyrfox
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| Posted: Fri Jun 17, 2005 5:16 am Post subject: |
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| rpgspotKahn wrote: | | I just don't think the vocals are too good... sorry, though the music is great. |
I unfortunately agree-- I liked the girl's voice more than yours, although you were fairly good in the second song "Boundless Ocean" since you were practically part of the background... Give the girl her voice! I think you'd be best off having the entire thing being synth'ed anyway, because it there's too much of a clash with your voices, imho. A shame, too, because I love the music, and most of the lyrics, I just really have a hard time hearing your voice near hers... Like yours is a demonic voice to her angelic voice. I can see the point it may make, but still hate them near each other, it doesn't feel right.
Keep up the good work though, I'm overall impressed with what you've done; I only wish I could do the same.
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Setu_Firestorm
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Haha!
No offense taken. It's always good to get criticism. I mostly don't like to do my own vocals simply because I lack the proper equipment to make them sound good. "Deceived" just was one of those songs that I couldn't hear her voice doing so well with.
Oh, and I just recently made the album covers that you can find along with the songs in the /exhiled folder.
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Setu_Firestorm
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UPDATE! Added tracks: 7-"Better Off" and 8-"Illusion". Firstly, you will need the lyrics to these songs.
http://setu.castleparadox.com/exhiled
| Code: | BETTER OFF
(v1) I was better left to the sunset
I was there but you never passed me by
You just let me fade in the moonlight
So you could clear your mind in the sunrise
(CH) I don’t think I’m any better off in here
Where everything I am has died
I want to escape from here
But I’m always asking why
Asking why
(v2) Are you happy now without me
Has your selfish fire made you dry
Have you lost all of your compassion
Or have you seen the light of the sunrise
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| Code: | ILLUSION
(v1) Standing in – the midst of reflections
Remembering – all of the arrows that
Pierced your – heart leaving you where you’re
Standing now – staring at destiny
(CH) When we touch – our hands meet the mirror
I gaze into – your eyes wishing that you would
Take my hand – help me from the glass
Into your life
(v2) I wish – that I could be more to you
Than just – a hopeless illusion that
Plagues your mind – just to remind you that
There’s no hope – now that’s the illusion
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Secondly, I would like feedback on these two, more specifically because I was experimenting with the usage of things I've never used before ("Illusion" for the most part).
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