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Raekuul
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 Posted: Mon Jun 20, 2005 5:04 pm Post subject: Zyzyx 1: Colora: Path of Color |
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http://www.livejournal.com/users/raekuul/5017.html
Plans:
Explain how Monochromus came to be
Elaborate on the Annul child thingy
Find a way to incorporate those who I hoped would be in the trap but weren't
Explain how Raekuul plays into the story
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Pako the True G
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| Posted: Thu Jul 21, 2005 9:31 pm Post subject: |
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what the hell are you talking about?
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LeRoy_Leo
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| Posted: Thu Jul 21, 2005 11:49 pm Post subject: |
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Pako: Don't you mean, "What you talkin' 'bout, Raekuul?'"??
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Raekuul
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| Posted: Fri Jul 22, 2005 4:02 am Post subject: |
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I take it you didn't read the link?
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Pako the True G
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| Posted: Fri Jul 22, 2005 9:17 am Post subject: |
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Fraid not Leroy, im not Gary Coleman, and this isnt Different Strokes 
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Pako the True G
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| Posted: Fri Jul 22, 2005 9:18 am Post subject: |
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I read the link and still dont know what your talkin' about 
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| Posted: Fri Jul 22, 2005 3:37 pm Post subject: |
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| Interesting backstory. You have obviously given it a lot of thought. You need to flesh it out a bit more, begining with the things you listed. Maybe change a few names, such as Velda and the Politicals. Some bits don't seem to make sense. From what I read, the are two necromancers, the evil one and the silver one. Is this right or did I miss something? Anyway, look forward to more of your work. |
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Pako the True G
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| Posted: Fri Jul 22, 2005 9:09 pm Post subject: |
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Since fernurion unknowningly explained your post to me, im now beginning to understand...
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Raekuul
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| Fernurion wrote: | | Interesting backstory. You have obviously given it a lot of thought. You need to flesh it out a bit more, begining with the things you listed. Maybe change a few names, such as Velda and the Politicals. Some bits don't seem to make sense. From what I read, the are two necromancers, the evil one and the silver one. Is this right or did I miss something? Anyway, look forward to more of your work. |
The name of the patron deity of Zyzyx is "Velda", and the Politicals came about... hmm... I'll have to explore that a bit further...
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