Castle Paradox

Zombie Hunter Green · Posted: Sun Oct 02, 2005 6:43 pm Post subject: FEDERAL OFFENSE

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Joe Man · Posted: Mon Oct 03, 2005 6:08 pm Post subject:

I think I'm beginning to get tired of the same furry all the time.
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Sparoku · Posted: Tue Oct 04, 2005 12:31 am Post subject:

Dewclaw looks more like she's pregnant in that picture. And what is she saying in the text bubble? I can't read some of it because it's too light.
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LeRoy_Leo · Posted: Tue Oct 04, 2005 11:34 am Post subject:

The Dewclaw says, and I quote:
"Yes. This is the city glory hole zoning board. The glory hole in the mens room is jagged and poses a safty risk. Fix it or we're sending you a citation."

Clever, man. And dirty. Very dirty. If one word could describe the concept, it would be AWESOME. But one word isn't good enough in the art corner. Wink

The arm which is resting on the table looks a little oblong. As in, longer than the one holding the phone. And bent funny. Yes, I realize her arms are an unusual shape, but their should probably be some proportion.
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Zombie Hunter Green · Posted: Tue Oct 04, 2005 3:07 pm Post subject:

The arm difference in length is due to the outstretched versus the clenched hand, the triagular arm/wrist portions are the same length and size. I think.

She's supposed to just look like she has kind of a trashy potbelly going, not pregnant. Not sure how to fix this since pregnant and pudgy look similar and I think she looks more like the latter.

Attempted to correct monotony by drawing a crowd.

Bob the Hamster · Posted: Tue Oct 04, 2005 3:51 pm Post subject:

A pregnant woman's belly is fairly firm, and fairly round, and only the lower abdomen will be swollen. Dewclaw *definitely* looks pregnant.

A "trashy potbelly" is soft, and less round, and needs to be accompanied by "love handles". It should hang over the belt a little.

Both result in a net increase of belly size, but a baby is in the center, behind the muscle, beneath the guts. A potbelly is on the outside, between the skin and the muscles.

That being said, the drawing as it is looks really good. I say leave her pregnant, and start worrying about who the father is.

Zombie Hunter Green · Posted: Tue Oct 04, 2005 4:44 pm Post subject:

I see what you're saying, but the hanging over the belt thing seems like it would require her to be signifigantly fatter and wearing much tighter pants.

Uncommon · Posted: Tue Oct 04, 2005 6:35 pm Post subject:

I think basically it's that it's too centered and round. Maybe if it drooped or something?
Does the raccoon have a mouth on his chest or is that a collar?

Fenrir-Lunaris · **WUT** Joined: 03 Feb 2003 Posts: 1747

Looks like an elizabethan collar, though his lower body looks like it's wedged through an accordian.

Zombie Hunter Green · Posted: Tue Oct 04, 2005 8:48 pm Post subject:

No, that's most definately a mouth on his chest.

Zombie Hunter Green · Posted: Tue Oct 04, 2005 11:10 pm Post subject:

LeRoy_Leo · Posted: Tue Oct 04, 2005 11:38 pm Post subject:

What is up with that fancy phone table? What is it? Roman column? Early Etruscan (not serious). I like it, but it seems out of place in that crowd.
This looks pretty clean now. Would be neat to see this in color, eh? ;p

[Edits] Color? Am I the biggest hypocrite, or what?.. Sad...

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