Castle Paradox

Sparoku · Posted: Tue Nov 29, 2005 8:24 pm Post subject: A sketch I did

I was talking with Linkmax and Sheeze when I did this. I just started doodling random lines and decided to turn it into something worth looking at.

Questions, comments, suggestions and even flames are welcome.

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LeRoy_Leo · Posted: Tue Nov 29, 2005 9:58 pm Post subject:

First of all, I admire the effort you seem to have put into her face and head. Every strand of hair stands apart from the others and the depth of the eyes is excellent. The effort below the face seems to have slipped, though.
The chest is rather plain and flat, not saying flat chests are unnatural, but I mean there is a significant break of detail here. Some folds would balance it out. If you want to just have a bust (just her head and neck), this would be great. The body just feels incomplete.
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Sparoku · Posted: Sat Dec 03, 2005 8:33 pm Post subject:

Taiyou Yume · Joined: 14 Dec 2005 Posts: 5 Location: The Dirty South

Okay, I do have a few sketches that I start off very detailed in one part, but leave the rest pretty blank, but this is really odd. I think, but this is just a sugestion, that you should do a simple outline, that's very anatomy-correct [like for your characters chin, shoulders, breasts], and then add all the details. I like the hair and the eyes, but the eyelashes are a bit too dense for my taste. Keep up the good work, I'm sure you'll get there!

Joe Man · Posted: Wed Dec 14, 2005 5:10 pm Post subject:

On the topic of eyelashes, who cuts eyelashes to be all the same length?
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Sparoku · Posted: Fri Dec 16, 2005 7:22 pm Post subject:

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DomGallo · Posted: Sat Dec 17, 2005 8:47 pm Post subject:

Who the hell cuts their eyelashes, period?
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