Castle Paradox

LongeBane · Joined: 03 Feb 2003 Posts: 312 Location: Tomorrow

I've embarked on another drawing! Look below:

All I have left to do now is color in that towel-thing.

Btw, The hardest part was the hair.

KainMinter · ***~*** Joined: 10 Jan 2004 Posts: 155 Location: Austin

Looks nice. You've got the female form down pretty well in both of your drawings.

Moogle1 · Posted: Sat Jan 07, 2006 5:49 pm Post subject:

The hips are too wide and the legs don't narrow quickly enough. Her right arm is also doing something weird and the placement of the finger is awkward. Face and upper body are quite nice, though.
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LongeBane · Joined: 03 Feb 2003 Posts: 312 Location: Tomorrow

The exaggerated hips were for effect. I think the body looks nicer with more of a curve-like nature. And your body can only curve so much in real life, so art is the opportunity to bring out the highlights of the female body.

DomGallo · Posted: Sat Jan 07, 2006 6:31 pm Post subject:

Is it me or is her vagina crooked?
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LeRoy_Leo · Posted: Mon Jan 09, 2006 10:03 pm Post subject:

Looks to me like her suit is hanging down there between her legs. In reality, there would be a little more space between her legs.

Since I am aweful with words, let me scrounge up an example of what I mean by a little more space between her legs.

Warning: Not work safe.
Disclaimer: This is for the artist's benefit and was not intended to hijack the thread, so keep your comments to PMs.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v706/ShawnLeroy/Anthro/Notworksafe.jpg

It's not perfect, but the area I wanted to show is there.

As for the rest of this; AWESOME JOB, man.
Looks like you sort of figured out how to make the eyes with whites...
Personally, I prefered the first style.
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Phil Arts · Posted: Tue Jan 10, 2006 7:12 am Post subject:

Better than your first drawing but her hair and face looks a little weird.

Zombie Hunter Green · Posted: Wed Jan 11, 2006 7:37 am Post subject:

You're just copying these out of "how to draw manga".