Castle Paradox

Onlyoneinall · **Bug finder** Joined: 16 Jul 2005 Posts: 746

I spent two hours in summer school drawing this. I remember a lot of people kept looking at the picture for some reason.

The interesting thing about this picture is the original drawing was done in five minutes. I'm not sure about the background, but I think it's okay.
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Gizmog1 · Posted: Thu May 11, 2006 7:23 pm Post subject:

I don't really have much to say about the first one, it's pretty consistent with your style, which I generally like, but there's nothing about it that absolutely stands out to me.

The second one has things that stand out to me, but it's not exactly a good thing. Her left breast (Our right breast) doesn't seem to be sticking out quite enough. It shouldn't be sticking out a lot, I think maybe you just overcompensated from what most artists do, where they always give you both barrels, whether or not it makes any sense. And her stomach looks like way too malnourished, because of it going down to a narrow waist, and her clothes wrinkling like such.

I think maybe if you made her waist a bit wider, and didn't make the wrinkles on her clothes curve so much inwards towards each other (Maybe even making them curve outwards, though I can't really envision it fully), there wouldn't be that problem. All in all, it's not a bad work, and it's kind of a step in a sexier direction from your other works.

Uncommon · Posted: Fri May 12, 2006 3:03 am Post subject:

The problem with the second one is probably just it's an awkward position for a person to stand in.

Battleblaze · Posted: Fri May 12, 2006 4:40 pm Post subject:

The 2nd strikes me as a chubby girl sucking it in for the camera and trying too hard to be sexy.
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Joe Man · Posted: Fri May 12, 2006 4:46 pm Post subject:

That said, not entirely unlike many instances I've personally seen.
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Onlyoneinall · **Bug finder** Joined: 16 Jul 2005 Posts: 746

The second one I suppose does have some problems, so I guess doing another version of her so you can see she is actually sexy without being in weird positions or something would help.
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LeRoy_Leo · Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 10:42 am Post subject:

very charming style, friend.
I agree with what has been said above, let's just get that out of the way.
The strokes you used to make these pictures remind me of someone running the pencil/pen back and forth as they make their lines. It remains consistant, which is awesome. I remember an art teacher telling me that was not a good way to draw. HAHA! What a shallow individual.

The faces all look like they belong to the same person to me... But then again, this is a technique thing. The little mouth, big eyes, and chubby cheeks seem to signify each character. Have you tried different features?
It's nothing bad, but I am curious.

Lastly, when you colored these in- I presume using PhotoShop- you left a few obvious edges where the stroke of the line and the paper which used to be there is still very easy to tell in the SECOND picture. Zoom way in when you render things to use in another background. I was once very guilty of overlooking this too.
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