Castle Paradox

Snow_fox · Joined: 12 Dec 2005 Posts: 151 Location: Red Deer, Alberta

Yay! more art! Um... okay so these are both boys and I thought they were cute but... Yeah so the first one I was all like "Yay, I finally drew another guy ^_^!" and then my mom looks over my shoulder and says "that girl have some good muscles on her" and so ... I guess he looks like a girl but I like him anyways HA!

This second one was just for fun ^_^

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Joe Man · Posted: Mon Jul 17, 2006 8:59 am Post subject:

The top one doesn't have such a rugged face for such a beefy figure.
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Snow_fox · Joined: 12 Dec 2005 Posts: 151 Location: Red Deer, Alberta

Just because your buff doesn't mean you need a ruff face No, no, no...

You can have a gentle face! Hehe~
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Joe Man · Posted: Mon Jul 17, 2006 10:44 am Post subject:

'Tis not manly to have a baby face!
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Snow_fox · Joined: 12 Dec 2005 Posts: 151 Location: Red Deer, Alberta

It's not a baby face, it's gentle! ><
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Joe Man · Posted: Mon Jul 17, 2006 2:50 pm Post subject:

He's an embarassment to men!
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Artimus Bena · Posted: Mon Jul 17, 2006 2:52 pm Post subject:

If the chin were not so pointy, perhaps it would look like a guy. Also, the belt is too tight. Guys don't normally wear their pants so tight it hurts, like girls do. If the belt looked a bit looser, it wouldn't look like you're trying to give him the hourglass figure of a woman.
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Iblis · Posted: Mon Jul 17, 2006 3:08 pm Post subject:

I think the biggest problem is the shape of their heads. They're very round. The heads should be taller and the foreheads shouldn't curve back so far.

Their eyes are somewhat unfocused. Looks like they're just staring off blankly into space.

I didn't have any trouble telling that they're guys. Their faces are a bit feminine, yes, but their bodies are proportioned well enough that it's still quite clear.

I like the second guy's outfit, looks neat. And the first guy's pose is pretty well done (dunno what he's doing though).
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Snow_fox · Joined: 12 Dec 2005 Posts: 151 Location: Red Deer, Alberta

These are actually meant to be colour, thats why their eyes have no pupil and such problems like that. The first guy actually had no shirt on at first... but then I wouldn't know how my mom would react! THe first guys pose is him touching part of his graphiti which I will also add with a painting program. I also like the shape of their face but I think I'll try something else now too~ So we'll see how it turns out, that light line drawing is still in progress and I have another guy that look a bit more manly coming up~ Sorry if you think their a disgrace to men but please remember that I have only just started to draw men and still new (and it doesn't help when all the characters you see are buff little boys, HOW DO THEY GET LIKE THAT?!)
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Battleblaze · Posted: Tue Jul 18, 2006 12:18 am Post subject:

In My Country 5:00 shadow=man, LongHair=80s wannabe, square chin=man ,roundkidface with the muscles of a 30 year old=mutant, lol jk
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