Castle Paradox

Artimus Bena · Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 6:33 pm Post subject: Drendaloria

Hello there,

I'm aware very few people in a game design site take any interest in my independent work, as it should be, but for those who happen to, perhaps I can count on you for an unbiased look at the entire work? Even those I allowed a preview before the release were not sent the story, and there were a whole two months worth of constant improvements beforehand as well. Maybe your replies will convince a few others to listen in, who knows. Five downloads in 10 days is not much return for a project slaved over for as many months

So how did you like it? Story and all ?
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Bob the Hamster · Posted: Wed Jan 10, 2007 8:26 am Post subject:

Hmm? Where is it? I could find what appears to be a single music trac from it, but where do i find the entire work? Links please! :)

TwinHamster · Posted: Wed Jan 10, 2007 9:22 am Post subject:

Artimus Bena · Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 6:03 pm Post subject:

Said "Project" is simply a 30-minute story in music form (accompanied by an actual short-written work)

My game ideas tend to be too big for one man, and internet teams just don't work out for me.

http://www.castleparadox.com/ohr/viewtopic.php?t=4709
This is the topic which contains links to both music and story
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Calehay · Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 11:55 pm Post subject:

You pretty much know what I think of it.

The ending's working out a lot better, especially now that I know the story.

Listening to this reminded be of the thing that I forgot to suggest to you. For a while, I was matching the wrong part of the story with the music. You might think about doing it in "tracks" with names based on the text. I'm not sure if you would be into that, but I think that it would make it a bit more clear which part is which.
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