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It looks good. Exept all the book shelfs have the same colored books in the same spot. You could fix that.
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The floor sticks out like a sore thumb. You should probably lower its contrast somehow in order to make the foreground objects separate from the floor more and have more focus.
Ditching the black diagonal lines for the tiles in favor of a dark grey, then resizing the diamond tiles around them should work, because right now the black and shading is suggesting deep crevices between each diamond.
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Artimus Bena
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Thanks for the feedback guys. Did a little more polishing:
I've tried texturing the red carpeting before and nothing I tried made it look better than just flat red, so I decided it just might be better without texture. Perhaps you have suggestions I haven't thought of?
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King Sasuke
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The carpets fine. But the windows let in no light, and there are no shadows that I can see, and the dressers could be pushed back to the wall.
The flags on the pillars the left one could be flipped or the right one.(It's up to you)
A+ on everything else though.
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The bookshelves are not that noticeable..
and yes, perhaps you could add more shadows...
Overall, nice job, dude.
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