Castle Paradox

[Greenwado]

Ok this is my first programing script ever so don't yell.

[Bob the Hamster]

The "if, begin" is wrong and won't compile. I don't think you want an if at all.

The rest looks okay to me, assuming I correctly understand what the script is supposed to do.

[TMC]

Actually, the rest is wrong too ;)

Use if only when you want some code to only run sometimes.

I assume you want to attach this script to something in Custom. To do that you need to use 'plot:plotscript' instead of script. script is only for internal scripts that you don't want to show up in the script browser Custom.

You need to make sure that your brackets match up, or Hspeak will give you a confusing error message. ( is the same as begin. Notice that you have two begin/('s at the beginning of your script (including after the if), and 3 end/)'s at the end.

"show textbox 1" should be "show textbox (1)"

"wait (ticks 6)" should be "wait (6)".

Also, it's worth mentioning that suspending the player while a textbox is shown does nothing. While a textbox is being displayed, the player can't do anything other than press enter to advance the textbox anyway. Maybe you meant 'plot:suspend box advance' instead?

So the fixed script is

[JSH357]

On that note, 6 ticks is a really short amount of time. I would recommend using a much higher number, in the 20-40 range probably, between boxes.

[Greenwado]

Well this is mmy opening cutscene with the "Greenwado presents" ETC. But this is my first script ever on any language and it looked nice at first...
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