Castle Paradox

[Shadowiii]

That's....nice...
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But enough talk, have at you!

[Blazes Battles Inc.]

Well... I suppose I probably should obnoxiously correct something, seeing as I read it... so...

[Eggie]

Mike Rose doesn't know it at all, but recently the sword he has collected in an ancient battlefield really belonged to the "Slayer". The "Slayer" was an evil man, full of prejudice hate. His spirit remained in the sword, as his soul suffered in Hell. His spirit has waited for a long time to fall upon an unlucky mortal who would become like him, unless the control was eliminated. He gave up his old sword and used it, not knowning that his mind was changing, and President Tryce could easily make him believe that Monstera are better off dead. His girlfriend is very concerned. What will happen to this unlucky being? What will happen? WHAT WILL REALLY HAPPEN?!
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Oh sorry, I got carried away...
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Oops! The narrator's not supposed to write down personal thoughts! Oh well, I'm new at this and, well I have to leave soon so... *ahem*

Enter Mike Rose...
A 15-year old teenager warrior lead into a battle against a harmless race that has kept peace with humans for so long. Until now...

[Eggie]

Mike Rose doesn't know it at all, but recently the sword he has collected in an ancient battlefield really belonged to the "Slayer". The "Slayer" was an evil man, full of prejudice hate. His spirit remained in the sword, as his soul suffered in Hell. His spirit has waited for a long time to fall upon an unlucky mortal who would become like him, unless the control was eliminated. He gave up his old sword and used it, not knowning that his mind was changing, and President Tryce could easily make him believe that Monstera are better off dead. His girlfriend is very concerned. What will happen to this unlucky being? What will happen? WHAT WILL REALLY HAPPEN?!

[Setu_Firestorm]

AH! It's a quadruple post! Get the Raid can!
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[Eggie]

Act 1 : Forward

I can’t believe it! Shawna thinks I have suddenly changed. As if. Really. I think she’s a little crazy. It’s totally normal to join the President’s force. I mean, other people want to enslave this race of Monstera, why can’t I?
Anyway, it was time to head out of my simple President City dorm and head to the Force HQ. I walked down the streets of the largely built metropolis. I went into the center of attention, a large grey building, Force HQ. I was pleased that I was already part of the army. Now I can actually live. My whole life was wasted to meaningless “Fun”.
I walked inside the busy halls of the HQ. There were three sets of stairs in the large room. One in front, to the left, and to the right. I walked up the in the middle staircase to see my general, Jackale running toward me.
“Glad you’re here, Rose.” He said quickly, “I need you to come with me to a battlefield. There was a group of men captured, and we need a couple to take down the Monstera army so we can free our men.”
I grabbed my new dark red sword, “It’s about time I did something for this force.”
“I like your style kid.” Jackale laughed.

[Eggie]

We headed out to the fields surrounded by thick forestry. I saw around 20 humans take on around 50 Monstera. Outnumbered, perhaps. But Monstera are puny and weak. All they are, are simple werewolves or whatever that use very little weapons other then their claws. Even their tek sucks. I ran into the blazing battle and slashed the evil creatures. They fell as I walked across their bodies and taking them down even more quickly then the last. They groaned as a couple of humans tied them up. I ran up to their caravan, the battle still being set, as 30 Monstera rose over 15 humans. I ran into the caravan and cut the horses loose to run away into the wild. They seemed so free. I used to like horses, but that is when I was stupid and didn’t know anything about the real world.
I ran up to back of the caravan and took down the two werehawk guards. I went inside the wagon and freed the prisoners from their ropes. They walked out as I ran behind the swarm of beasts and took them down from behind. I made them bleed, until they were all on the ground coughing blood, gasping for air. I went back to the base and let the other boys finish up.

[Eggie]

Later, at night, Shawna came in my room, darkened by the lightless sky and demi-closed door. She’ll probably talk about how I’ve changed and everything she said before.
“Mike?” She came through the door, “Can we talk?” Oh shit. Not this again. She’s supposed to support me, not tell me everything I do is wrong.
“Whatever.” I looked out the window.
“Ahh…” Shawna sighed, “Never mind…” She went out of my room. That was quick. I like it that way.

[Eggie]

The next day I got a letter message from Cid, my old master, when I worked for the Peace Corps. He wanted me to reconsider staying in Force HQ. Ha ha. Really, I mean does he think I’ll listen? I just ignored it and went to General Jackale’s office. There was the President Tryce. He was the one who owned Jackale.
“Hello, Rose.” Tryce greeted, “I am glad to hear your efforts on the battlefield yesterday. Today there will be a larger battle. I want you to be in it.” Anything for the Force, “I will.” Jackale and Tryce smiled. I went to the door and walked out of the Force HQ, through the streets of President City, and to the battlfield, surrounded by mountains. It was to rough to create an ambush on the mountains, so I guess this would have to be done closely.
I got out the Ragnarok, and ran into the crowd of raging humans and Monstera. I ran into the cloud of energy, and started taking down as much as Monstera as I could, which was a lot. I made them bleed. It gave me such a rush. Adrenaline rushed through me. It was amazing.

[Rpeanut]

kool idea...and stuff
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[Eggie]

I then got a radio call. I ran out of the battle. I was assigned to go to a Monstera base and take out some high and mighty guy. Jackale gave me directions to this building. I ran inside to find to guards. I fell them quickly. I ran through the halls toward the command room. There he was.
A werehorse commander. I had him trapped. He had Celine Dion playing on his stupid music stereo. She sung, “Hush… now… I see the light in your eyes…” It driven me insane. I approached him, “Now you’re mine, maggot!”
“Please stop…” He backed off, “You are being brainwashed by the President!”
I raised my blade to him as he backed off into the corner of the room, “All he says is true. You are f*ck*ng scum!” He ran across the room. He then took a glimpse at my sword. His eyes opened quite widely, “H-Holy Shit! You got the f*ck*ng Ragnarok! No wonder you’re so goddamn ev-“ I just slashed him.

[Eggie]

He got up and quickly raced out of the room. I followed him through the halls, as I got a radio call from Jackale, “Have you dealed with the leader?”
“No,” I answered, “But I-“
“Forget it.” He interrupted, “I got a better job. Go back to the huge battle.”
“Yes General.” I acknowledged.

[Eggie]

I returned to the still ongoing battle. Jackale gave me orders to cut through the crowd, then head through the Monstera village, then fianlly go to the Monstera Temple and destroy it. Whatever he wants I’ll do. I am part of Force.
I ran through the energy full crowd of fighters and managed to get through. I seen there was a wall with a bunch of weredragon guards blocking the entrance. I dodged their stupid fireballs and took them down unharmed. Weaklings. I ran through the entrance and down the street towards their temple ontop of a hill. There homes were small, wooden walled, and straw roofed. They ran away in fear of me. Some werefox girl in baggy clothes was on the path to the temple. I pushed her out of my way. Her mother came and took her out of the way.

[Eggie]

I finally arrived at the temple. They had a statue that looked like Jesus except it was a wereraccoon. There was an old weredragon priest and werewolf monk and two werehawk younger priestesses. I pushed them out of the non-walled stone temple. I pushed them down the very steep hill, but as I did, the werewolf stole my sword, and ripped the belt for it’s case right off. I yelled down at him, “I’ll ge tthat back you bastard!” Even though, I felt really, really… odd. I watched as Monster fled the village.
I then saw a wererabbit girl in a white dress. She saw me and wasn’t scared, “I suggest you leave.” I through a bomb in the corner, “No.” I had to save her… What?! Am I crazy?
I pushed her out of the temple, “Okay! This place is going up. Leave!”
“Hey stop that!” She struggled with me.
“Get OUT!” I screamed at her. I stepped on her dress, and tripped on her, ripped the bottom off. There I was, laying on top of her, face-to-face, and she is almost half naked. We gazed at each other, stunned. She talked, “Get off of me, before I kick your ass…”
I got off of her slowly, when suddenly, “KABOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!” We were thrown a little back. The temple collapsed and
She was unconscious, and I had that funny feeling again. It was weird, but then something more interesting. A light shot up from the temple ruins, it started to curve, and aimed at me! I ran into the temple, but it caught me. I was in this light filled zone. Then suddenly, it got darker.

[Eggie]

(Man something is up with my posting system!)

Act 2 : Somewhere I Belong

There I stood, in the middle of space with two floating balls. One was shining bright, and had mist rising from itself, with big black eyes. It looked at me. I was a little freaked out. The other one was black, and sparkly black mist rose from it. It looked at me angrily. I stepped back, in fear.
The black one flew at my face and talked in his tough male voice, “You bastard! You hurt lots of Monstera and some of them might die!”
“Oh my God,” I gasped realizing reality, “I did hurt all those Monstera.”
“Yeah,” The black orb agreed angrily, “And now I must say you’ll be punished!”
“Slow down Shade,” The white female voiced ball spoke up, “Just stop. I’m Lumina, the Spirit of Mercy. He’s Shade the Spirit of Criticism.”
“I’m not gonna stay here long,” Shade snapped, “So I think he should die and go straight to Hell!” Shade disappeared. I was in trouble now.
“Why did you do hurt all of those Monstera and joined that Force?” Lumina asked.
“I don’t know why!” I snapped at her, “I have no idea! That’s not me!”
“Well I can only give you mercy to a certain degree,” Lumina sighed, “You must promise to make things right.”
“I will.” I nodded, “I really don’t know why I wouldn’t after you are helping me.”
“Well…” She murmured, “I can prevent you from dying, but even so, that has a cost.”
“Whatever it is, I’ll pay it, as long as it doesn’t harm others.”
“That’s the spirit!” She laughed. I then seen light race at me like before, and I was back at the temple. It was rebuilt. Odd.