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Minnek Conjurer

Joined: 03 Jun 2003 Posts: 430 Location: Somewhere
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Posted: Sat Jan 31, 2004 12:05 am Post subject: |
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I'm with Shadow on this one. Awesome work, AWESOME. _________________ * SDHawk has joined #Minnek
SDHawk> AAAAAAAAAAAAAUUUUUUUUUGH
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halogrunt001

Joined: 24 Aug 2003 Posts: 17
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Posted: Sat Jan 31, 2004 11:21 am Post subject: |
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That was the most awsome thing I've seen, it should be made into a movie!!!! |
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Shadowiii It's been real.

Joined: 14 Feb 2003 Posts: 2460
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Posted: Sat Jan 31, 2004 12:13 pm Post subject: |
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A "Bob the Hamster" flash movie would be really cool. _________________ But enough talk, have at you! |
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Machu Righter, a person who rights wrongs

Joined: 09 Jul 2003 Posts: 737
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Posted: Sat Jan 31, 2004 1:37 pm Post subject: |
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Ooh, we need OHR merchandise! Bob plushies would be awesome! _________________
Code: | [*]That's it
[*]I'm done reasoning with you
[*]Starting now, there's going to be a lot less conversation and a lot more killing |
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Uncommon His legend will never die

Joined: 10 Mar 2003 Posts: 2503
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Posted: Sat Jan 31, 2004 3:37 pm Post subject: |
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Well, it's good, but I wouldn't go so far as to say it's the best thing ever. |
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Bob the Hamster OHRRPGCE Developer

Joined: 22 Feb 2003 Posts: 2526 Location: Hamster Republic (Southern California Enclave)
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Posted: Sun Feb 01, 2004 11:02 am Post subject: |
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Uncommon wrote: | Well, it's good, but I wouldn't go so far as to say it's the best thing ever. |
Clearly the words of a man who has tasted a good M.L.T, Mutton Lettuce and Tomato :)
Machu wrote: | Ooh, we need OHR merchandise! Bob plushies would be awesome! |
The castleparadox store already has some OHR merchanidse-- but sadly, plushies are currently beyond the capabilities of CafePress |
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Jazz_Man

Joined: 02 Sep 2003 Posts: 248 Location: My basement.
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Posted: Sun Feb 01, 2004 3:25 pm Post subject: |
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Hey hey, James.
Well, for starters, the art is good. Has it's own style to it, and I like it. Very "Bob"-ish.
My only complaint, I guess, is with the dialogue/humor. Nothing TOO bad, really, but the first few chapters just seem a bit... off... to me. Like you went for the obvious jokes. But the humor picks up later on in the last couple chapters. Overall, it was clever, but nothing I found really laugh out loud funny.
Also, the dialogue. One line that stuck out to me, "The snow is starting to fall!" Just seems unnatural to me. "The snow is falling!" or "It's starting to snow!" seems much more concise, and gets the same message across in fewer words... which is probably important for a man being eaten by wolves. But, overall, the dialogue was a little.. I dunno... off?
But hey, these are just minor complaints. Well done comic.  |
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Bob the Hamster OHRRPGCE Developer

Joined: 22 Feb 2003 Posts: 2526 Location: Hamster Republic (Southern California Enclave)
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Posted: Sun Feb 01, 2004 6:14 pm Post subject: Humor |
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Yeah, the humor does start off slow. I am concerned that people will read the first chapter and not bother going on to the lter better ones. Well, if I get inspired with a better beginning episode, I may prefix it to the series and re-number them.
One thing I like to focus on, and one reason my humor will not be for everyone, is the fact that I like to focus on timing. Most cartoonists wouldn't dream of wasting three panels on a full page just to have Bob look left, then center, then right again. I just like drawing things out somtimes, in an attempt to convey a sense of pauses and passage of time not often present in comics.
Anyway. Thanks for the constructive criticism. I hope you enjoy the future chapters more. I have a couple good ones still waiting to be colored. |
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Roach Lir

Joined: 08 Jul 2003 Posts: 119 Location: United Kingdom
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Posted: Mon Feb 02, 2004 10:19 am Post subject: |
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I think you're a great artist James. I wish I could draw a bit better. _________________
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Mr B
Joined: 20 Mar 2003 Posts: 382
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Posted: Mon Feb 02, 2004 10:51 am Post subject: |
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James Paige wrote: | Uncommon wrote: | Well, it's good, but I wouldn't go so far as to say it's the best thing ever. |
Clearly the words of a man who has tasted a good M.L.T, Mutton Lettuce and Tomato  |
Oooo. We have similar movie interests. An obvious sign of good taste.
But I was thinking, I sit on my legs, too. It drives me brothers nuts. Probably murders my posture, too. Geh...
As far as the comic goes, I was kind of startled by the ladybug interlude. Was it part of the story, or was it just 'there?' Incidentally, ladybugs bite! That many of 'em would probably put Bob in the hospital! But I really enjoyed the comic as a whole -- tell Bob to keep up the good work. |
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Roach Lir

Joined: 08 Jul 2003 Posts: 119 Location: United Kingdom
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Posted: Mon Feb 02, 2004 10:56 am Post subject: |
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Bob rules. _________________
Dark Legacy - 0.3% |
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Uncommon His legend will never die

Joined: 10 Mar 2003 Posts: 2503
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Posted: Mon Feb 02, 2004 4:54 pm Post subject: |
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James Paige wrote: | Clearly the words of a man who has tasted a good M.L.T, Mutton Lettuce and Tomato |
Where the mutton is nice and lean and the tomato is ripe?
They're so perky. I love that.
(had to check the DVD for the exact quote ) |
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Mr B
Joined: 20 Mar 2003 Posts: 382
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Posted: Mon Feb 02, 2004 7:12 pm Post subject: |
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They have it on DVD!?!
*adds item to birthday list* |
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Komera

Joined: 07 Feb 2003 Posts: 711
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Posted: Tue Feb 03, 2004 4:33 am Post subject: |
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Mr B wrote: | They have it on DVD!?! :O
*adds item to birthday list* |
saw it at wal-mart a couple of days ago. _________________ LJ.Art
SD - Ten creatures remaining. |
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Rpeanut Chop Chop

Joined: 16 Mar 2003 Posts: 160 Location: dunno
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Posted: Tue Feb 03, 2004 5:09 pm Post subject: |
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Awesome art, real funny to.
ummm i dont get more enthusiatic than this...
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my tissue box is ringing...
I'm scared
Whats MLT?... _________________ ...eh? |
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