Castle Paradox

Taiyou Yume · Joined: 14 Dec 2005 Posts: 5 Location: The Dirty South

Well, I was awesome enough to read through this entire thread. You certainly have improved pretty drastically, but I have a few suggestions.
1. Instead of crayon, which makes it hard to distinguish shading, try colored pencil.
2. The anatomy. You're making some of the lines really really straight, like abdomens and arms, which should be a bit more curved. And work on your breasts, boy!
3. Try out some new hairstyles. Yours are all very spikey and unrealistic looking.

Battleblaze · Posted: Thu Dec 15, 2005 10:04 am Post subject:

Eggie you starting to kick some ass.I still remember the first pictures...lordy.Like I said, starting to kick ass.
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Eggie · Joined: 12 May 2003 Posts: 904

Kupo! I was feeling down while I was drawing this picture, so to perk me up a bit I drew a little moogle attenae on her head, and that's why I beat off to this picture.

I was practicing lady anatomy more. Sorry guys, I still haven't downloaded and porno anatomy references.

DomGallo · Posted: Thu Jan 05, 2006 8:19 pm Post subject:

I've forwarded that picture to Squaresoft. God willing they'll have a crack Yakuza assasination squad en route right quick. Please stand still, and don't assume a false identity or move or anything that would make this hard.
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LeRoy_Leo · Posted: Thu Jan 05, 2006 11:01 pm Post subject:

Torso still needs to be less stubby. Something about the face seems strange too. I daresy the rim of her nose is too close to the eyes, but I guess this is just a recessive trait.
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Eggie · Joined: 12 May 2003 Posts: 904

It's everybody's favourite Asian-French, American-accented, homosexual, and tough toonphiliac... Nigel!

One of the big problems is this chin, so I am asking that you help me with this terrible dilemma. The dilemma of th chin.
In this picture I positioned the arm differently realizing a mistake I made in the past. I also realized that I need to practice my asian eyes.

Also, some hero spriting:

KainMinter · ***~*** Joined: 10 Jan 2004 Posts: 155 Location: Austin

The chin seems ok to me, though he doesn't come across asian.

About your sprite, I like the shading and the pose. Reminds me of a Megaman 7 sprite X)

PS: Your interpetation of a moogle is creepy. ..kupo.

Obright · Posted: Tue Jan 10, 2006 6:21 pm Post subject:

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Gizmog1 · Posted: Wed Jan 11, 2006 9:45 pm Post subject:

THIS guy's gay.

Obright · Posted: Wed Jan 11, 2006 10:14 pm Post subject:

So is this guy...

Your point?
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Eggie · Joined: 12 May 2003 Posts: 904

*Wipes the dust off of the Post Reply button*

Hello! I'm back after a good *starts counting on fingers* March, April, May, June, July, August... haffa year and, boy oh boy, do I still suck!

But, my burning rage... my burning rage to improve shall not be tamed so easily! For their are times when one must rest and one must draw, and I haven't done either. I have been pixelating... this:

This is Edgar "Eggie" Stulrex, a spiky-haired protagonist, which is less original than the 2005 remake of Yours, Mine, and Ours. He's a very forward fighter, so his stance, I believe, is fitting. He is my persona.

(I want his hair and his jacket.)

Note: This sprite is based off of X's (Mega Man X, Mega Man X 2, Mega Man X 3) sprite.

This is Yikumi. She's not too enthusiastic about fighting, so I think it is fitting that she doesn't look completely ready to fight.

Note: This sprite is based off of Terra's (Final Fantasy III (US) / VI (JP)) sprite.

Moogle1 · Posted: Tue Sep 05, 2006 9:51 pm Post subject:

It's kind of obvious that the first is based off MMX. The hair is absolutely ridiculous, almost to the point of parody. The second isn't obviously Terra, which is good, but her hair is the same color as her shirt which makes her hard to look at. Also, her graphical style is way different from the first's. Are you putting them in the same game? They can't look good side by side.

The top left forehead pixel on the top sprite is really weird without the hair there. It looks like his forehead is poking out.

[rant] On a completely unrelated note, when can we stop saying FF3US, FF6j, and so on? FF3 is coming out in the US soon, meaning our collection will be complete, and FF4 and FF6 have been re-released under those titles. [/rant]
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LongeBane · Joined: 03 Feb 2003 Posts: 312 Location: Tomorrow